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for Jealous Proposal

by CodyMThomas

schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! ^_^
person landra02
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back^^ Your story is great!! I love reading it and I am really looking forward to your next chapter^^ (even though you just posted a new chapter ;))Do you have an update mailing-list? If there is one please add me^^
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Harry on this one. Dumbles can shove his 'greater good' when it's a cover for pure sticky beak edness.
person Miss Poodle
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, where's the rest of the story? I need to read the rest of it! :-)
person Cherry
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah thanks for the early update that was fantastic, now go write me more plz :)
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I find myself checking every day for an update, I love your bunny. Severus is the best, love the light you've put on him. Now I'll be sitting here waiting to find out about the ring and if hermione will tell Harry (whatever it is) before Severus does. PLEASE, update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the new chapter.
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
RE: the bonding ring... most stories that bring up the bond view it as soul deep connection. You don't have to use it as an acutal empathic or telepathic connection. Play it as Snape being able to feel intense emotions like absolute anger or fear. Use the ring as a catalyst that can begin growing the bond before the full marriage / bonding rights are performed. Run that idea past your rabid bunny.
person Jan
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story!

Please update chapter 6 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow fast update. Hope more is to come soon.
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*pats your back.
you have every right to be proud... its good stuff.
I hope it happens for them. 1 day they can be together like they want and just tell the rest of the world to sod off.