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I've been a bad girl in not reviewing 'til now so I thought I'd take the time to procrastinate further on doing university essays to tell you that you're doing an awesome job ^^ I'm really picky about what I read and you've kept me both interested and not infuriated with poor writing. I really look forward to your next update and hope this review helps to keep the writer's block at bay :)

3 words.
I. Love. It.

This is one of the best stories I have read, and am currently reading. It sucks you in! I about died when I finished this last chapter. Severus is so cunning <3.

I look foreward to chapters to come!

~Vana~

Wow.. you think I'm good.. I'm drooling ;) just finished Chapter 4. think I might to lie down. love it!

Colin! that little shit!!! this fic is fantastic.. please update as soon as you can.. are you going to save Lucius (I do have a soft spot for my blond bad boy)? ;)

I may just be dense but I think something might be missing here. What is this organization that Harry, Ron, and Hermione are working on? Seems like Snape, Black, others are involved too. Got a bit lost.

Really enjoying the story overall though. Good Harry/Severus interaction and hot sex to boot! Hope to see an update soon!

wb. I think you'll find being at the mercy of plot bunnies is standard for pretty much every writer now and again. I know I have no hope of herding the little buggers. frikkin psychotic most of them are, i swear it. At any rate, i remember enjoying this story very much and I'm glad your muse is back in business. This was to good a tale to leave sitting.
i love snape btw. He's got 'to thine own self be true' down to an art form. Lol, Dumbles really stabbed himself in the hand leaving Har to be abused didn't he. He lost the loyalty of one of his most valuable... and his weapon/sacrifice to be. I take it Ron and Mio aare in on the scarpering plans? Not sure about Bill and Charlie but I reckon the twins would side with Har over Dumblles... they owe him for their start up costs if nothing else.
I also love the trust between him and Har, obliviated memories to the side. He might not be as naive as he was but it's still a weakness, so i'm glad he has a slippery snake to watch that gap.
I also take it Dumbles didn't get zapped by a certain Horcrux? Will the Hallows play a roll in this?
Will the rats life bond be made use of at all?

This chapter started out, no problem. Then I got really confused, though it was mostly explained at the end of the chapter. The majority that I understood was great; did not quite follow the bit about Harry, Ron, and Hermione, the training, and the coins thing. Was that something that was briefly mentioned in other chapters or are we to find out in later chapters? :) anyway, looking forward to your next update!

I just discovered your story and i love it!! I can't wait to read more =)

i really like it so give me more plx hehehe waht are you going to do next i really watnt o know hahahah

Hmmmm, muse food, muse food. What have i got around that's good for feeding muses.
I know. I'll ask some questions.
What would be easier to work into the plot. Luc and Cissa running or being re established.
I think it would take something pretty big in order for Morty to let Luc back into his good books.
Seeing how draco has scarpered, I'd think the pair is more of a flight risk, especially has they owe more alligence to themselves than Morty.
How much of a roll does Cissa play and what's she like. weak? Manipulative? Bitch from hell in disguise?

I do like Sev's gray attitude and his assesment of what dumbles and morty are like.
I also love how much of a horny teenage cum slut Harry is for Sev and how Sev handled the under aage issue. Gotta give it to the man (and the one who wrote his character here) that's some epic self control and will power.
I also loved the flowers part. harry is such a simple man.

Is that enough, I'm sure i can think of other things to bbring up...
what a hungry little muse. ^^ Maybe we should feed it some plot bunny pie. :P