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for Jealous Proposal

by CodyMThomas

person aloHola
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm speechless.
honestly...I don't know what to right.
That was SO hot
person Sharae
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story, pease continue. Good to hear that you've experienced what your putting Harry through, alot of people write it and have no idea what it actually feels like. That feeling of letting go and freedom is amazing and I'm glad others get to experience it. Keep up the hard work.
person Sera21
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah, that was great ! In fact, how about we just skip the whole plot and you just write porn??? :D I can really tell that you have done many of the things you describe, very realistic scene...I was wondering if you could actually tell me if it is possible to come with a cock ring or a glans ring. I have always presumed that it was possible with the latter but not with an actual ring around your scrotum but another author on this site ( no names) regularily has her Harry cuming even though he is wearing a cock ring. Is that still possible? If yes is it also possible with a cock ring that goes around the scrotum and the cock? ( triple cock ring). Would this also be applicable for a "gates of hell" type cock ring?? Thanks so much, not planning on actually writing but just curious. Oh and I like to have my facts straight before I criticize 40 year old housewives making 'a go' at a BDSM story XD
person Sera21
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
P.S Happy Birthday

P.P.S Remember, no matter the mess and what it is, Dobby will clean it all XD !!!!
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't really understand the mind set that says it needs pain or physically uncomfortable marks to prove it's in a relationship with someone, but i guess Har has had a hard core life so why would his love life be any different. I don't get how pain can cause pleasure either, but whatever floats their boat, you know.
I gotta say, i prefer the story line chappies to the smut but that's only because i hate waiting to find out what happens next and the smut chappies are like interludes... stuff I;d come back and read later once i got to the end of the story.
Having said that, i do eagerly watch out for and await the next chappie of this fic.
person AloHola
schedule January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Loved the fic. This is once of the few Ive read which actually feel real. Im oficialy once of your fans. I cant wat for the update and i think Ill start reading one of your Otero ator
person sana
schedule December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
huh, I wish my bf would spank me when he was riled up. I won't bored you with sordid details though and just suffice to say that I'm loving this fic. I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see if any of the Malfoys were caught and during the entire 'Princeton' scene I was absolutely speechless, I thought that was actually another bloke (even though it actually was that time lol) and I was absolutely stunned when Harry was treated so roughly and seemed to love it even though I was wondering what was going on with the stupid bonding ring the entire time; wasn't it supposed to stop that? But here I'm working myself into a tizzy over nothing, (though I would like to know what happened to that miserable excuse for a wizard creevy, whatever snape did to him he deserved it) so I'll hush and wait (not so) patiently for the next update.
person djaddict
schedule December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Guh!

Just love your Snape!!! Great characterization.

I am a bit worried about the ring that Narcissa gave Draco however...

Can't wait for more!!
person Sharae
schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, and I like how you cleared up the S&M question, glad someone else realises there is a difference between playing and joining the lifestyle.
schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! my fave story updated again.
Damn, Sev is GOOD, the way he plays them all is magnificent! Can't wait to see what he cooks up to get Luc out. Not to mention how he plays Moody and a certain sacrificial rat.
As for Skitta :P.
Luna is downright scary at times. Glad she likes Har. -_-'
Is Snape going to drill Har on manners for the family announcement dinner?
Nothin wrong with a little kink. (says the girl who owns a full length pvc jacket and bitch boots >>) In a bdsm sitch... the way i understand it, a flogging or a spanking is anything but punishment. :3