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for Jealous Proposal

by CodyMThomas

person slearl
schedule November 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and hope you are continuin. I can't wait to see what Severus did to Colin
person KR
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
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Are you still updating?...any chace of a time-turner three some? You know, like Harry/Snape/Furture Snape? Or Furture Harry...or both. ... ^_^
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story.
It's so different and more realistic.
I like that it's not a too fast paced story and takes its time to develope.
I hope you write more sooooon :D
person ali
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please update!!!! *begs*
i love this fic & cant wait for more.... so seriously... update soon please <33333
person sciphy
schedule June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so much. please update again soon
schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you do your research. It irritates me when writers don't and just make stuff up off the top of their heads.
wow, lots and lots of review fodder in that chappie. WB by the way and if that was an example to go by, i'm saying your muses are back on track and your mind is unblocked.

So har isn't just BWL now but head of his own secret agency? That's awesome... not only is that awesome, but that's smart as well. I'm assuming dumbles doesn't have a clue or if he does, he has no idea of the scope?
Also, the horcrux thing, is that an issue in this story? the Harry horcrux could really put a dint in things.
heh, acme, i always thought they should have a practical use as well (one of my characters carries a few on her for getting out of restraints and storing things in. ^^)
Windmill or rather WDML huh, that's very clever and also made me smile.
So did the bodice ripper author who snuck real magic into her books (You GO girl!) I can soooo see har convincing Sev to try out a thing or three from those... and hopefully we'll get to read about it. >> ^^
I still don't really get why har wants or needs the rough play, but hey, if he's happy, whatever floats his boat neh?
I'm grateful the drought is (hopefully) over and look forward to the next chappie as this is one of the stories i keep an eye out for.
person Madxhatter
schedule February 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damn good story! It's a great mix of saucy snarry, adorable tender moments great friendships and an incredibly intriguing plot.
So thank you for giving us readers something good to sink our teeth into :)
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just re read the last chapter....blew me away again. My new one for altered minds...in case you haven't read it...is up.but now looking at yours again it seems woefully inadequate :(..maybe it's because I have limited experience in the BDSM scene. Well enough of my moaning...bloody fantastic job. Almost makes me want to try it ;)
Update as soon as that plot bunny bites!
Let me know what you think about my attempt lol
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow...wow..wow...i need to lie down in a darkened room! ;) hot hot hot!
I like the idea of the glove...i've only used peoples fingernails to score the skin before...mind if i use that in Altered Minds?

Looking forward to next chappie (Dying to see how my new chap influenced you) :)
Thanks for saving my lovely Luc.

Suzie
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schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY by the way.
Hope you had a good one!