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for Jealous Proposal

by CodyMThomas

schedule September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
person delia cerrano
schedule June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just had to reread this story to this point. It is as good as it was the first time! I hope you will be able to update soon. I can't wait to read about the dinner with Severus's family!!
schedule April 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well just read all you have posted in this story. What a wonderful read. Like your Severus. So commanding, stirs me up quite a bit. Loved the chapter where Severus works Harry over till he is in subspace. Well written & your descriptions were excellent. Impressed with your backstory on how the two came together. Your flashbacks are scripted cleverly. I'm having such fun reading this story, I hope that you are able to update soon. Thankyou for such an enjoyable story.
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I hope that you are still writing and will update soon. :-)
person SoulMore
schedule February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
FAN!~
person mary blackman
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story if you do an update or sequel pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee send me the link to it thank you
person djaddict
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see an update, I was really missing this story!

I really love your Severus and the 'scenes' are so incredibly hot.

So totally anticipating the next update!
schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is really well written and I like that you have found a really excellent rationale for them to be together, rather than just completely changing Snape's personality (as I have seen done more times than I would like to have). It is also good to have someone writing BDSM who is clearly knowledgeable about it and not scared to write it as it would be. I am also glad you are managing to get a good balance between smut and plot. Keep it up, will keep an eye out for your next update.
schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this story. I actually can see Snape being quite protective over Harry. I think deep down he is a softy.
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i can see this story will have a complicated plot and i can't wait to read more. i like how you can balance the smutty, the fluffy, the manipulations, the evasions, the war, the new magics, and everything else so well.

please update soon :-)