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by dirtydarella

person SParker
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now, THAT was different, Harry Potter as a Personal Trainer. I can honestly say I've
never seen that type of situation here in this section.

I liked it. :-)
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That ending was a bit sad. lol I dunno, I just hoped for a bigger indication that Harry understood that Draco didn't just think it was casual. In any case: awesome! lol The trap so Harry couldn't wake him up was very amusing. I loved that scene where Harry told Draco he had the body of a God. That was hilarious. Wonderful job once again.
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so yummy! I really liked the idea of Draco being obsessed with his flab, and with him being jealous and lustful of Harry's toned body. Mmmm, Sounds good. Off to read more! SP
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this!!!!
person Vittani
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. That was absolutely brilliant. Draco's initial refusal to do yoga was great, very in character.
person Jilliane
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM


I know I've told you this before, but really, I can't tell you enough. I love your Harry/Draco oneshots! Well, really, I love all your stuff. I love how you write both characters, and I love the humour in your stories. Great job, as always, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nicely done!
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very cute hehe
person Roozette
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grin*

I LIKE you! I think your stories are funny and fun and this was certainly no exception. Nice interaction between the two. I simply adore a snarky Draco and less-than-clueless Harry. Good read :)

Loves!
Roo
person drkdsire
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanna curl up by the fire with this story.

Amazing, doll!