rate_review Reviews

Wow, interesting portrayals of Hermione and Luna. I just finished Chapter 2 and Luna's little 'adventure'. I'm sure Harry is very stoked to have these two girls so interested in him. I would love to hear more of Harry's thoughts about how he feels towards the girls and how their personalities affect him. Why did he have a crush on Hermione? Was it because of the way she looked or more about her support and personality? I'd like to know what he really thinks of Luna's apparent sexual liberation, too. Is he surprised at how up front she is about her sexuality?

I think the story holds a lot of promise. I am very curious about the dreams of Andraste Luna has been having. I would like to know more about the origins of that.

I am also very curious about Luna's transformation when she consumed Snape by fire. I'm a little worried that the kids' are so bloodthirsty they didn't have enough compassion to assist the man suffering from third degree burns. When are Harry and Luna going to talk about what happened?

Okay, I'll go read the rest now.

Good story. I cant wait for a real threesome to take place.

Nice chapter. This Mewtwo will wait on the next one.

Hot!

damn real good can not wait to read more of this story it is getting real good please update it soon

Bery good story mate, I love how the story is going and I can't wait to see what you have planned next, so PLEASE update soon.

good chapter bad cliffie

I love it! More, please! Is there any way I can receive notices as to when you update? Please!
Debby
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I'm really loving this story. Please keep up the great work!!!

this is preaty good so far could use a bit more detail thou please update a.s.a.l.a.