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for Strict Machine - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person dragon37
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
His eyes are just as much a turn on as the rest of him, I sometimes watch Harry Potter just to see Lucius's eyes, They are so sexy.
person Anon
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That certainly was hot.
person Scary B
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I'm in love with a Strict Machine

Yes I love that song too! This was the perfect short story for it as well! I love reading pure erotic fantasies. They are so much fun! :D
person CoCoM
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
VERY erotic. Well done. I like the take on Hermione and of course, sex god Lucius. *fans self*
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! I do love that song and your story fitted it perfectly. Complete naughtiness then a little bit of love at the end - a perfect oneshot.
person tsorg
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've mentioned this before but I love your writing. I can visually picture the characters when you write. Thank you!
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Never heard the song, but I am a music whore, i love all genres! I love the fic, Lucius the Dom is just too....mmmmmm yum.....
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whew! That was intense and HOT! I've never heard that song before, but I'm going to right now.

Personally, I've never been into the whole BDSM thing. But if Lucius was welding the whip, I probably wouldn't mind so much.

Thanks for the interesting song choice and the steamy read!

MHS