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for Young Girl - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person Elle
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Blasted woman! Don't do oneshots! Your too good at weaving your words, readers don't want to settle for just a taste! Bah!

Love ya, though. Please update Beyond the Veil Soon.
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh you tease! Thought there might be just a squeeze of lemons between them but solo Lucius was yummy! Hermione was a little vixen wasn't she, knowing just what to say to entice him. How could he resist and what a birthday present for Hermione! So good!
person pittwitch
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaarrrrgggghhhhhh ... hanging off the mantle, begging to step thru the Floo, too. Please, please, please?
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! Great song too! I adore the fact that he was having a toss in the men's, thats hilarious and I wish I were staring at him through a peephole...thanks for answering the challenge! I am loving all of the interesting music people are selecting.


Happy Writing!
SG
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lololol. Poor Lucius, he didn't stand a chance.

When the Girl Guides are finnished with the tent, perhaps you, me and the rest of the girls can borrow it for next summer's adventures. Mmm hmm, I think so.

Luv ya work Labib xx
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn it! You stopped at the floo!?!?

I loved the angst...Hermione's wantoness...Lucius' indecision. Made for a very enjoyable read (regardless of the lack of lemons :)) I really liked the wanking in the men's though...that took the edge off (for Lucius and myself LOL)

Can we expect a follow-up?

MHS