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for Young Girl - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person maggie
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah, very nice... but it kinda left me hanging!
person The Green Fairy
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH!
Where's the rest of it? :Searches her house in alarm:

Well since it just flew out of the window, I will compliment the remaining half.



Utterly...delicious.


Your writing is the epitome of sexual tension.


I must go now, and emulate our dear Hermione.


L'amour

The Green Fairy
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, she certainly was going to get what she wanted, now wasn't she?
person mageemi
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man this is so good!!! I want to read more.
person amyfeddy
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have become quite a fan of you. It's too bad this was a oneshot, one more chapter would be like a cherry on top of a chocolate covered Lucius. I know you aren't going to give in to tantrums and whining, but maybe a little begging, or spanking (giving or receiving which ever you prefer). Just a suggestion.
person scary B
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw LaBib, I want more! Lol

Of course I understand if you don
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh LaBib, I really did like this! LOL. Loved Lucius' futile resistance and Hermione's brazen attitude!
person CoCoM
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you are considering a continuation of this!!...Please!
person Bookworm
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As always.. Great work!!
I love Hermione like that... Makes me wish I had the guts to just say to someone... I want you!
But you can't leave us without the lemons!!!
Please, please.. I realy want to kwon what hapens when he arrives at her place!!
Anyway.. thanks for the great fic!

person doodle
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your work is always concise and well done. Your unexpected use of words and phrases is fantastic ie "A tent big enough for the Girl Gudies to use to camp" not an exact quote but it was perfect. Thanks for writing.