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I feel torn here....I know that Lucius is being a bit unreasonable but Hermione is kind of ticking me off as well. I don't know that it is such a brilliant idea to rush to Severus after having a fight with Lucius and then proceed to cry and be comforted in his arms, etc, etc. They are best friends, I understand but....hmmm, I am going to have to think about this a bit more....
As usual, anxiously awaiting your next update!

And so sweet. Wouldn't we have done the same?
Great story. Thank you so much it is really a treat to read.
LOL, Alex

Silly man! He should know better! But... she should give him a bit of a break. I think her bringing up Sev in the last chapter & running to him in this one should be addressed too. They have to talk!!!

I don't know what is going to piss Lucius off more. The fact that Hermione went to Severus or the fact that Hermione will not bend to his will. This is either a very good thing or a very bad thing because Severus has an intimate knowledge of the inner workings of Lucius. I guess time will tell. I fear for the happy couple, however I am jumping for joy for Severus. As usual well done!!

Lucius, Lucius, Lucius...Sometimes I don't know if I want to love him or if I want to choke the life out of him. Ugh! I swear that man is blind, deaf, and dumb if he does not realize that Hermione not only loves her job, but she needs her job. It's an integral part of who she is. I don't think he understands that Hermione would be devastated, completely lost if she had to give up her work. And Lucius is a total nutjob if he thinks demanding that she quit will make her change her mind about it.

Thank god that Severus is there to talk some sense into both of them. Only he will be able to make them see reason, that they are both being stubborn fools if they can't work this out without hexes being thrown, tears being shed, or hearts being broken.

Damn! I hope it all works out. It's too far into the game for Lucius to cock things up so badly by being oblivious to Hermione's wants and needs. And Hermione needs to get it through her thick head that Lucius is only being his usual dictator-type self because he cares for her so much. It seems like death is constantly beating down Hermione's door, so Lucius has every right to be concerned (it does not mean that he should be an arse and try to micromanage her life)

Great chapter! Looking forward to your next update.
MHS

Oh dear. Stupid Lucius.

Lucius sounds like Molly. He's heading for a slap at this rate! It'll make what happened with Narcissa look like a pinch!

Though, going back to Sev is a bit more productive than slapping him... it's a more metaphorical slap.

Drama? What an understatement, lol!

Awww, Sev's taken on the elder brother role now; unfortunately most big brothers are incredibly protective of their little sisters... and Lucius had better watch his back. A lot of people love Hermione for many different reasons, and if she became upset, they'd all seek vengance.

Unfortunately, all I can see is Harry saying something along the lines of 'I told you so' and Ron saying, 'he's drop dead gorgeous, but the biggest prick in existance.'

And poor Sev's in the middle of this. Poor bloke... oooh! I've had an idea... but you might not wana read it... what if she'd picked Sev, not Lucius - how would that have worked? Have you got room in your 'notebook of wonders' for that one?

Hope family and yourself are in the best of health and the best spirits possible under the circumstances, *hugs*

Ah! Good old-fashioned Lucius medicine...he can most definitely cure what ails you! LOL

That was very Slytherin-esque of Hermione, taunting Lucius with going to Severus to fulfill her carnal needs. Never deny a horny Hermione, Lucius! Bad form!

I'm anxious to see how exactly Hermione will be different after the accident. So far I haven't seen much change; she seems to be the same aggressive witch regarding the assertion of her needs. Of course I expected her to be aggressive when she has been forced into celebacy for over a month. I'm wondering what other differences we will see. Will it be some sort of memory loss? Or will it be a more drastic personality change? Maybe this accident will be the rude awakening she needs to see she shouldn't just rush in blindly into situtations.

Regardless of how this will play out, I'm looking forward to it.
MHS

thanks for the update. i know about living in hospitals. i have a 7 year old and he decided to come at 28 weeks. he's healthy now but for his first 5 years we lived in hospital. hope things are going better for ya. update as soon as you can.

Ah, I am finally caught up with this story! Or should I say series. I absolutely love the way Snape and Lucius acted towards Hermione while she was unconscious. It's so nice to see them written as caring and loving wizards, instead of heartless bastards. LOL!

Speaking of heartless bastards, I liked the way you redeemed Ron. At least he had the decency to apologize for acting like a jerk. And would someone slap Molly for me! Attacking Hermione like that. She's just jealous of the two delectible wizards she is with! LMAO!

That was not fair of you to tease us with a hint of another possible snogging session between them, either! I'm still trying to get over that one from when I read it the other night. =)

That was very naughty of Hermione to threaten to go see Severus for her "needs." I am not surprised that Lucius got a bit cross about it. However, I cannot complain about the end result. ;-P (We only want her with Severus here if it is all three of them again-that is always welcome! hehe)