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Chapter 14: Oooh, Lucius is like a bull, bellowing and pawing the ground. Kinda cute. But the poor baby doesn

This was a great chapter, I like how Sevvie tries to soothe her but it just makes her madder. My heart aches for him everytime I read about him in this tale. He needs a good woman in his life...Perhaps...A Goddess? Hehe....

I really enjoyed this chapter and cannot wait for more!

Hope you had a great day =D

Hugs,

Vic x

I know, I know they are BF's but I was having to battle my frustration with Hermione there for a minute....I am very pleased that Hermione is starting to see things a bit from Lucius's (and Severus's) point of view. I guess that the other way to look at it is that Lucius and Hermione are too passionate (which is why we love them, hello!) to be able to reason with each other like Hermione and Severus do. I know this, I do. I just get a little bit hurt on behalf of Mr. Malfoy, that's all! :-)

Nothing like the advise of a good friend to make you realise that you're being a asshole. And I love the idea of petting Severus like a cat. I would just love to do the petting myself.

Duckie, chapter title isn't too reassuring...

Lucius seems to ALWAYS trip up like this (presents and stuff) poor bloke needs to listen to her and take notice... or be a Slytherin and ask Sev what would impress her!

Bloody Hell! Can't he just throw a few hexes, rather than trash the place? Maybe? I don't like violent Lucius.

Why do I think that Hermione calls Draco 'Bitch' - and not him calling her it? lol!

What's normal mean? Does normal exist? Someone give Lucius a slap for me. Oooh, but first, give him a dictionary and tell him to look up the word compromise and add it to his vocabulary.

Poor Sev's playing devil's advocate here. Poor bloke. Odly enough, I've been there and done that. I was the one who sorted out the mess between my best mate (a bloke) and his long-distance missus. It worked out for the best by them splitting up - but they didn't see it from the outside looking in that they were both miserable. I just nudged them in the right direction after getting both sides of the story.

Best bit: Draco/Hermione 'pet names'. Though, I've a very kinky image of Hermione in a dominatrix outfit standing over a supine Draco with a riding crop... *blinks and makes a run for it* 15/10 just for that bit.

Keep up the good work, I love the story. I like it that her best friend is male. I am married (almost 23 years) but my best friend is male also. I talk to him about anything and everything.

Well, well, well Severus certainly knows how to handle Hermione doesn't he. I never thought I'd see the day where Draco had to give his father pointers on a relationship. Lucius might be losing his ability to "rule" a relationship completly but he needs to grow to be with his witch. Its nice to see that you have really kept his personality in mind it makes him seem more human. Sometimes when a character is OOC they seen unreal this is a clear exception. I am loving this story and I can't wait for more. Well done!!

LOL - Loved Lucius' temper tantrum! He can be such a spoiled brat! Of course, I understand his frustration, and I don't see him as a person who likes to compromise. Hhhmm, Hermione doesn't like to compromise either. Thank goodness for Sev. He's turned into a bit of a softie, huh?

awsome i loveed it please could you write a draco hermione story next if your looking for ideas

Oh can I please please keep Severus? I love it when he's being sweet. Great chapter, emotional but good I really got into reading this one. I wish your chapters were longer sometimes because I wanted to keep on reading this one. Lucius will come around, he's smart. Funny that he compard finding stuff and being a death eater - so not the same thing. But guys will say anything to get their way.