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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ice story i loved each part... i really enjoyed hermiones personality in this fic you wrote her very confident!!!! i really enjoyed severus and how he embraced his sexuality and the relationship that he has with hermione the bond that they have.... lucius was perfect in this very strong but tender i like the way thatyou wrote him... but he still had traces of the old lucius that was great as well.... wonderful job now onto a severus fic or maybe i will read something in the way she moves again???
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow what a great chap... and yeahhhh shower time!!!! so draco has a play thing i wonder if one day it could become more she seems to be rather grounded!!!
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg that was the BEST chap.... i can not believe hermione punched narcissa that was great but she had it coming.... oh wow great job sg and i love that hermione just wanted to rub salt in the wound when she amplified her and lucius in the hall... i loved the beginning with draco i thought he was going to walk in on them that would have been funny i love his personality in this very sarcastic
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow what a lunch i was wondering how lucius and severus would respond to each other with this new change in their relationship.... severus and hermione are funny the way they share their food i imagine it will take lucius some getting used to i mean he only has narcissa for an example
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow great chap i was wondering if you would throw in a confrontation with the weasleys.... great chap... i lovethe protectiveness of severus and lucius.... and i love the beginning of hermione and lucius' relationship
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok so they got the tomb open and of course hermione was excited to to get started wow she pushed lucius out of the way i think if he was thinking that would have happened differently.... i am glad severus has a clear head under pressure
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ha ha i love that hermione calls lucius' cane a pimp cane that is funny as hell..... i am glad harry came around i am sure that ron knocked some sense into him.... way to go draco that i think was one of my fave parts!!!!! lucius is a peacock an adorable and sexy as hell one but still a peacock.....
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aahhh a coddling lucius that is so cute but i can see where it can become annoying!!!! great chap although she did play dirty by throwing severus into the mix.... although that was some great smut!!!!
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow while i think that lucius handled that ALL wrong i do think that there is a middle ground here.... great chap
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhh i love severus in this!!!!! so he is helping hermione to see the other side of this or at least what lucius was TRYING to say... and draco is funny he loves poking lucius and driving him to the brink when he is in a foul mood...