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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AFF deleted my review for 3 because it went into 'backup time of the day' - when I'm not so cheesed off with my long review going missing, I'll go back and re-review!
Well... I've got tango Roxanne from Moulin Rouge in my head - and its a pretty visual in there too!
Rule number one for sex - find a convenient solid surface first.
Ha! Wizards can't park either! He's blocked in! lol!
I wonder, had she chosen Severus, how long would Lucius have been courting madam palm and her five daughers before he snapped? Would he ever have gone after another woman if she had chosen Sev? At this moment in time, I'd have gone for Sev over Lucius, Lucius is acting a prize prick! He's like a spilt brat and has to get what he wants! A carriage in a carpark (or carriagepark, if you prefer) is not the way to do things! She deserves better after dressing up all prettily! Stupid Lucius!
You think there'd be a spell to hide sex-rocking carriages! Poor Amy having to witness that!
10/10
Well... I've got tango Roxanne from Moulin Rouge in my head - and its a pretty visual in there too!
Rule number one for sex - find a convenient solid surface first.
Ha! Wizards can't park either! He's blocked in! lol!
I wonder, had she chosen Severus, how long would Lucius have been courting madam palm and her five daughers before he snapped? Would he ever have gone after another woman if she had chosen Sev? At this moment in time, I'd have gone for Sev over Lucius, Lucius is acting a prize prick! He's like a spilt brat and has to get what he wants! A carriage in a carpark (or carriagepark, if you prefer) is not the way to do things! She deserves better after dressing up all prettily! Stupid Lucius!
You think there'd be a spell to hide sex-rocking carriages! Poor Amy having to witness that!
10/10
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He he! I love the elf!
*groan* here come the puns, lol. God, they're bad!
Ask him or her to come out... does Draco swing both ways? I could live with that... and watch too! lol.
Shoes always manage to eat your feet - it seems the magical world haven't cured that yet. shame.
Ohhh... darling! You KNOW how I am with underwear! Those descriptions were a treat!
Ha! see! Its not just a girly thing to comfort eat puddings! Wonderful, Lucius seems more human all of a sudden!
I saw a shower like that not so long ago - it was in the sale and going for a fraction of the price - it just needed new doors as the originals were scratched... shame we don't actually have our own house to put it in yet! We must be the only couple who have all our furniture (with the exception of a washing machine) and no house to put it in! lol!
Nice reunion.
10/10
*groan* here come the puns, lol. God, they're bad!
Ask him or her to come out... does Draco swing both ways? I could live with that... and watch too! lol.
Shoes always manage to eat your feet - it seems the magical world haven't cured that yet. shame.
Ohhh... darling! You KNOW how I am with underwear! Those descriptions were a treat!
Ha! see! Its not just a girly thing to comfort eat puddings! Wonderful, Lucius seems more human all of a sudden!
I saw a shower like that not so long ago - it was in the sale and going for a fraction of the price - it just needed new doors as the originals were scratched... shame we don't actually have our own house to put it in yet! We must be the only couple who have all our furniture (with the exception of a washing machine) and no house to put it in! lol!
Nice reunion.
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for the conclusion of this story the moment the last one ended. As usual you didn't disappoint. I must say I am feeling a bit sad for Severus though. It is clear he loves her and just wants her to be happy, even if it is he that suffers. The scene in the restaurant was priceless. I can just imagine a seething Lucius and a gloating Draco shooting glares from across the room. Can't wait for more. As usual very well done!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a brilliant start to the final part of the triad. I loved the fact you used Draco's Slytherin
side to get Hermione and Lucius back together. A bit sad for Severus though.
Lovely to be reading your story again. Best wishes, Donavon.
side to get Hermione and Lucius back together. A bit sad for Severus though.
Lovely to be reading your story again. Best wishes, Donavon.
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! Especially Sev's advice to Hermione and Draco's cunning to get her to the restaurant with his father...
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!!! Part Three!! YAY!! Fantastic opening chapter...i always find a drunk hermione entertaining...and a sweet draco is always a favorite of mine ;-) Poor Sev having to deal with idiots all the time...LOL...Can't wait for chapter 2!!!
Love
Lady B
xoxoxo
Love
Lady B
xoxoxo
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2:
As much as my heart hurts for Sev, i am so glad he recognises that Hermione and Lucius are right together and is willing to push Hermione to do the 'Slytherin' thing. And poor Lucius out going out with a much younger girl as favor to a friend, what ever will Hermione say about that? ;-)
Love,
Lady B
xoxoxo
As much as my heart hurts for Sev, i am so glad he recognises that Hermione and Lucius are right together and is willing to push Hermione to do the 'Slytherin' thing. And poor Lucius out going out with a much younger girl as favor to a friend, what ever will Hermione say about that? ;-)
Love,
Lady B
xoxoxo
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo! I've been anxiously awaiting the third part of Adventurous Hearts. Great intro chapter. Lucius and Hermione both can be such idiots. I'm looking forward to seeing how all of this will work itself out.
Can't wait for the next update!
Can't wait for the next update!
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Draco is quite the troublemaker......but for a good cause. its so awesome to see that after so many years all the childhood hatred can be set aside. And i love the fact that Draco and Lucius have a tight father son bond, that it was possible after all that happened in Draco's formative years....i must say i am enjoying this Amelia character...do i sense a little romance on the side for draco? ;-)
Love
LAdy B
xoxo
Love
LAdy B
xoxo
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4:
The Tango a very angry, sexy dance. Lucius is so yummy!!! i loe that they almost got it on int he cloak room. LOL, thats fantastic, and the make-up sex......hot hot hot!! those two are damn near explosive together!!
Love
Lady B
xoxo
The Tango a very angry, sexy dance. Lucius is so yummy!!! i loe that they almost got it on int he cloak room. LOL, thats fantastic, and the make-up sex......hot hot hot!! those two are damn near explosive together!!
Love
Lady B
xoxo