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Whoo Hoo! Narcissa finally gets her comeuppance! I love it that Hermione's fist was 'connecting with Narcissa

Everyone loves a good catfight. Narcissa needs her scrawny ass beat! Hermoine's amplification spell was pure Slytherin genius.

You know the smut made up for the waiting. I can't believe you had Hermione and Narcissa in a catfight and a good one at that. The term "catty bitch" is seldom used but it does describe some women to a "T". I love the fact that Hermione seems to have some unkwown control over Lucius. I know it is mostly lust and adoration but it always nice to see a slytherin be taken down just a bit. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the rest of the conclusion. Thanks for the GREAT update I loved it.

That was an amazing chappie! I loved Hermione getting her own back on Narcissa, she deserved it "self important twat" lmao. Dracos reactions are so funny, his mix of amusement and disgust are great. I love your descriptions, you are a phenomanol writer :)
My holiday was good thankyou, i went on an adventure type camp where we did surfing, kayaking, and coasteering. I managed to get seriously sunburned so i was glad to be back and have some time to relax even though it was lots of fun :)
How is RL for you? i was sorry to hear about your RL problems i hope it gets better for you.

-Sheep
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I totally agree about Draco. It's got to be Tom Felton - he's too cute to be all bad! This chapter was too funny! I loved prissy Cissy!!! Can't wait for more!

Another great chapter in another great story. You amaze me!!!

thank you finaly i loved it i cant wait to read more

Oh! Narcissa so had that punch coming! Nice. The new chapter is lovely. As for your comment on "baited breath", I looked it up on Google. It turns out that it isn't "bait", but "bate" meaning "slow breath". Get it? Good. Can you explain it to me now? LOL! Take care and update when you can!!!
P.S.--you are so correct about bait! Yuck!!

Drumroll please.... it's part three - and if it's anything like the other two, then it will be worthy of that 'da da da daaa' bit at the beginning of 20th Century Fox films! It'll certainly be worthy of a StarWars scrolling title thing! lol!

Oh dear, trollied Hermione isn't a good sign.

He he! Here comes the brilliant one-liners - I think you and LaBib are fighting over the title of 'Queen of the One Liners!'. He's a good man... sort of *giggle*

Oh, she's still a woman under all that alcohol... especially with the shower comment! I do that, and I don't drink! I HATE crap showers! Power showers all the way! lol.

Awww! Sev's so sweet *hides from snarky man, sweet is probably an insult*; he's looking after her so well! I wonder if he's ever really taken care of anyone other than himself!

Can I start the queue for slapping Lucius around the face... or will there be no face left after Sev, Draco, Hermione and whoever-else has had a crack at him? (Though, I do have the Monty Python 'fish slap' sketch in my head at this point - and Lucius being wellied by a large cod sounds like fair punishment!)

Oooh, 10/10 for chapter one.

You can tell he's posh - he said 'pardon' not 'what'. My Gran was forever telling me to 'talk properly' - yet she had the broadest Yorkshire accent! lol.

As a tee-totaler, I've never had a hangover... but your descriptions are a definite reminder as to why I don't drink! Poor Hermione - but it was self inflicted, so she won't be getting much more sympathy from me.

Clean shirt and joggies... knickers? Bra? maybe?

Does Zonko's stand a chance against WWW anymore?? Must be bad if Malfoy have bought them out - and cheaper than expected!

Riiiiiiight... and the press snapping pictures of the ambassador's daughter on Lucius's arm ISN'T going to do any damage? Is Lucius aware of anything?

10/10