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schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! SMUT!!!!

I have read all of your Adventurous Hearts stories, and I'm quite looking forward to this one. I love the lemons so far, and I still love the fact that she adn Severus are still friends. Even the bitter old dungeon bat (Albeit the SEXY dungeon bat) needs a friend... Can't wait for more...!
person Shetan
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful story
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My lovely, beautiful amazing S_G! What a brilliant start to your outstanding series! I have to say the rocking of the carriage was brilliant LOL, totally how I imagined the scene would play out in my head. Lucius is as always, totally delicious. I totally wish I was Hermione, gods I'm so jealous!

Loved, loved loved Draco, what a hottie, Tsk, Amelia got it good didnt she?! LOL, I can't wait to read more!

Love, as always,

V x


person Utopia
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh... seeing as he's a snake, does he have a forked tongue? lol! In one of Angela Knight's books there was a line referring to a dragon: 'once you've had forked, you never go back'. lol!

I don't think I'd be able to do that with my other half at breakfast! That lad can eat! I'd get whinged at for feeding him too slowly! lol!

OMG! Stop. The. Press! Lucius said Luv! Wow! He's got it baaaaaad. lol!

Is Hermione wearing knickers under that jimjam top? *giggle*

I'd have yelled at Draco for that! I thought she was a Dr. or Prof.? I had one teacher who hated it if people called him Mr. Brett - It was DR. BRETT, he'd worked binking hard for his PhD, and he was going to be called DOCTOR... it normally ended up as Mr-Dr-Brett when everyone kept forgetting the title! I had an image of Herms reprimanding Draco for getting the title wrong! lol!

person ilke
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YIPPEEEE! I'm so excited for the new installment! What a great beginning! Yahooo!
person ilke
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh explosive Malfoys are so yummy! And I couldn't help but "awwww" at Draco and his father's date. Not a useful review I know, but I am really enjoying this!
person ilke
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
night after night as he lay in his bed and missed her. --- it's such a simple statement and I don't know - so powerful at the same time.
LMAO - drop trou! Oh no you di'int! LOL!
Oh, it's all so sweet and wonderful now. Why do I get the feeling it isn't going to stay that way?
Such a wonderful beginning, or beginning of this phase. I can't wait to find out what happens!!
person Angelbaby
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yah part three! I loved loved loved it. Flirting with Lucius' girl was a very dangerous thing for Draco to do, luckly he was 'rewarded' for his match-making efforts, (burn the cushion - LOL). Poor randy Lucius couldn't even make it out of the parking lot. The story could end here at chapter five but luckly for us you love to empty all the stories out of your head and you'll add more chapters. Oh yeah and I so understand the dancing naked Slytherins in your head, Snape never seems to leave mine....happy writing.
person Bookworm
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the fight between Narcisa and Hermione!
Great chapter!
person carha
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you finally got it up. Figures, every time I cant get to a computer for a couple days, I come back to one of your stories. At least it makes the wait seem shorter :)
Great story so far hun. Looking forward to seeing more. I kinda hope Draco ends up with that girl. She seems to suit him. And please dont forget Severus' happy ending too.
Hope all is well in RL for ya. Looking forward to your next update!