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awww, i want Sev and Lucius to take me out!! Or just take me...LOL. Well done, sweetie!! I am not a Ron fan but i like how you portrayed him in hti schapter! I am sure Lucius and Sev have increased their respect of Ron (but only by a smidge) because of his defense of Hermione. Waiting oh so impatiently for chapter 9....

Love
Lady B
xoxoxo

chapter 8
Whi! New story up! I really like the begining of this story. I especially liked the chapter with Hermione and Narcissa! That was interesting and believable. Narcissa seem to be a woman who can be a real bitch. I'm not sure I would have thought Molly to be so mean, but JK hasn't written so much about her, all you really know is that she is very protective about her children :P But if she is a bit homofobic, I guess this could have happend... And it's your story, so you decied what the characters oppinions Ah, well, it made the plot interesting at least :P Hermione handled it very well!
Tihi, I'm liking your promise about more smut :) I'm looking forward to the update!
Take care!

Thanks love! I think the way you did it was PERFECT.

Major Hugs-
-D

What is Sev actually going through here? Is he throwing back anti-depressant potuions like the rest of us drink water? Oooh, I wonder what she whispered to him??

Awww, at least she tried to help the walking dead.

She's still in the blue! lol! I loved the description! Wow!

sev's one of those blokes who goes mental for a woman doing the hoovering in nowt but a pair of stilettoes, isn't he? lol.

If you look up 'bitch' in the dictionary, Molly's face would be printed next to it.

Ha! Ron looking up Lu and Sev! OMG! I'm shocked they haven't backed into the wall! My Dad's an engineer, and the guys on his shop floor are 'sharing' an apprentice... they take the mick constantly, and the apprentice is too gullable for his own good... well, the fellas at work have convinced the apprentice my Daddy's Gay... apprentice doesn't know how to act! lol!

I still want to see a HG/Sirius in your bunny hutch of 60+ plots! lol!

A little too short for my liking.. but your writing is as smooth as always. I will be anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

Naughty Hermione. Teasing Lucius would be soooooo much fun. The ferret comment by Sev had me snorting my coffee, so funny.

Chapters 1-4: Hermione was lucky that Draco got her safely to Severus. Draco got an earful from Snape and it went right back to daddy. Thank goodness. It was so bittersweet how Snape took such good care of Hermione even after they were no longer lovers. Draco knowing just a bit about the threesome is funny, if a bit unnerving for the young man.

Oh, that

Oh! Forgot! Here's a web site explaining bated breath. (Not baited, but it is such a common error that it will probably take over as correct usage soon. And then be even more weird and head-scratching.)

http://www.worldwidewords.org/qa/qa-bai1.htm

Hope it helps!

I love this story so much. The interactions between Severus, Lucius, and Hermione are done really well. Great update, I can't wait for more!

Oh to be a little tart....Oh wait...I am one LMAO.

I LOVED this chapter LOL, I would love to see that kiss again...*sighs*

So Sev has BDSM tendancies does he? He always seems like he wants to submit to me LOL, well he does to his mistress =D

A brilliant chapter my love!

Vic x