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person kittycat30
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
She better make Harry work for her friendship! I don't see Hermione forgiving him quickly anyway. I'm sure she'll wake up. I really want to know what's going to happen w/ Sev. Hermione & Lucius have made it pretty clear that they aren't interested in a threesome. I hope he won't be lonely & sad forever! More soon, please!
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5: [grin] Hermione never liked to fly. Finally it looks like Lucius and Hermione have found their way to each other
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Chapter 6: It sounds like Draco has a very good technique of his own
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Chapter 7: Truly, I don
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Chapter 8: Oooh, sexy. Both wizards certainly clean up well. And so does Hermione. It will be a difficult labor of love for Lucius to accept Severus as Hermione
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Chapter 9: So, was it the toxic gases buildup that killed Carnavon or was it really just an infected mosquito bite? The tomb was a magnificent find, but how awful that the loosening of the wards brought part of the tomb down on poor Hermione. Sometimes I wonder how she manages to get through her ventures when she
person Elle
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And I was so looking forward to Merlin actually being alive down there, some longstanding act of great magic. He wasn't killed, just endlessly trapped... I don't really know where I thought you'd go with it, but it was my gut prediction. Illogical though it seems now, what with the Tomb in such a state of disrepair. Unless of course that was a last ditch effort of warding of intruders...

Nevermind, there's no reason to think he would be alive. I know Hermione will get better, and I know she'll wake up when she needs too, plot wise, I'm just interested in what this near death experience means... how it will alter your characters. Will Snape decide to fight for her? Unlikely, but traumatic events have a way of changing perspectives.

Blah blah blah, love your story, hope you update soon. I have no expectations, and I make no demands, other than you provide me with chapters as quickly as you can. I trust you as an author, and that they'll be of quality.
person mariteri
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had never thought of Lucius as a Pimp daddy before! Great chapter. Keep up the excellent work and update when you can.
person Larrabee
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BOOOO Harry! And Bitter Weasleys!
person CoCoM
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for the pimp cane! LOL!
I am glad Harry has seen the error of his ways, although I wouldn't be rushing into forgiving him straight away. I do hope that Hermione wakes up soon and puts Lucius, Severus and Draco out of their misery.