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person Janeplay
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVIN' IT EVEN MORE!!!! I do so enjoy it when Lucius and Sev are naughty (showing their Dark Marks!)! Great writing, and keep it up! :)
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew you wouldn't kill her off....I love it so far..more chapters please xxxx
person KellyJCR
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would kill for those two sexy men to give me a bath. That was the most caring not to mention sexiest thing I have read without it being remotly smutty. The relief that Severus showed was extremely touching. I love that you have Draco supporting his fathers relationship with Hermione. That fact alone shows how much he has changed and matured. Great update and thanks in advanced of the sweet dreams I'm going to have of Severus washing my hair tonight. Well done!!
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahahaha! Wakes up, gets high on potions and demands her men to kiss - no, not her, but each other. *looking at screen affectionately* That
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad she and the whiner are friends again. It makes me all teary when I read about the love between Sev and Mione, as much as I love Luci, I want Sev to be happy.

But alas, there is no one for our Mione, but our Lucius.

Lucius is our king!

Really great chapter sweets, I eagerly await the next!

Love, as always,

Vic x
person mia
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was one of my favorite chapters. I was lmao right along with Draco. I love a stoned Hermione. Love the filterlessness. This was wonderful. And I can't wait for more.

~Mia
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really? Are you sure it's a line you won't cross? What about sex with a vampire? Isn't that technically necrophilia? lol Great update, I'm so glad that things are getting better. My heart still aches for Severus though....but just so you know the offer to look after him is definitely on the table. lol I can't wait for more!!
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I'm a weapy blob now. I love the way you write the Slytherin Sex Gods. Thanks for redeaming Harry, by the way. He was such a little prat in the first two. Although, it wouldn't hurt to have Sev punch the little twit just once. ;)
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh so sad....Made me wanna cry...Infact I shed a few tears.

Heartbreaking chapter, one of the best I've read so far and they are all fabulous!

Can't wait for more!

Vic x
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm dying to know how Hermione's going to recover from this one...will she be the same Mione that we have come to know and love, or will she be a different person entirely? Can't wait to see how that will turn out.

I am livid that Harry wants to make amends now. He has had YEARS to get over the ending of Hermione's relationship with Ron. Where does everyone get off making that their problem anyways?! Personally, I wanted to see Severus go all Death Eater on Harry. Harry most definitely does NOT deserve Hermione's forgiveness and it would be fitting to see Harry receive some physical pain in exchange for the emotional pain he has caused Hermione over the years. But, of course, Hermione being the Gryffindor she is will more than likely forgive Harry and stop Severus from beating him within an inch of his sorry life.

There are so many things for you to work out in this story. I'm looking forward to seeing how you will make it all come together.

Waiting (somewhat) patiently for your next update!
MHS