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person Jesse
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about all of your hospital visits. That is never fun. But on a more happier note: I really loved this chapter!! Lucius trying to make sure Hermione is all better first! :) I love it when Hermione gets mad.
person Angelbaby
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yah she lives. Can I please please please borrow Sev and Lucius at bath time? Just once then I'll give them back, promise. *sigh* Laughed so hard when Draco realised he was under her spell too. Men amuse me. Great chapter, I love a fiesty Hermione. Oh and I loved when they showed off their dark marks, naughty boys.
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh..the return of lust!! a wonderful thing....

Hermione is lucky to have a man like lucius (and Sev on the side in case it doesn't work...LOL)

Another brilliantly written chapter (do you ever not write brilliantly...LOL)

love
Lady B
xoxoxoxo
person Gertie
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thou shalt not taunt a horny wizard...but look what happens when you do! Thanks for the regular updates. I have a lot of spare time on my hands and this gives me something to look forward to.
person Utopia
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If Hermione's anything like me, she'd have throttled Lucius by now for his coddling!

Do you think Sev's aware that his name is the one Hermione will bring into an argument to get her own way? He'd probably be laughing at Lucius for letting it get to him!

She says 'jump', Lucius asks 'how high'... he's so under the thumb that he's subterranean! lol!

Erm... how will contraceptives work with all the meds she's been on? The pill gets pi*sy with a number of drugs, are the charms and potions going to be the same?

Sounds like my mum, I turned up 9 weeks early and mum had pre-eclampsia. She wasn't even conscious for a week after my birth - and I didn't have a name. I was just (quote from wristband) 'baby girl Fisher'. Mum was a hospital out patient for about two years!
person CoCoM
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean, no necrophilia?! That should be number one on the list of things you could write about.....ugh, totally joking. I feel like I need a shower by just having typed that.
Anyway, glad Hermione is awake now (and they are all cleaned up, smelling and looking nice!). Can't wait for her to get out of the hospital. I was laughing my butt off when she was doped up on pain meds and sharing intimate secrets about Lucius with Draco (and Lucius trying to get him away from her before she revealed too much!).
person Utopia (not logged in)
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You can tell you've been in hospital with the opening desription - Its one of those things you can't describe as well unless you've been there, done that.

Yep, Hermione's not OOC - artifacts first, life second... takes you back to OotP - school first, life second. lol.

Oooh - beardy boys. lol. I'd actually like to see some fanart somewhere where the fellas have facial hair - I can only actually imagine clean shaven.

Awww... Sev's crying. You're going to set me off now. We never got to see My Granddad open his eyes after ICU.

You know you're on the road to recovery when the sarcasm kicks in... mine was after an endoscope going down - and I pointed out that if I could manage over a metre of tube, that deep throating can't be so bad... my other half then asked what drugs they'd pumped into my arm as I was terrified of oral sex... Gotta love whatever was injected into my arm - and the following codiene tablets. lol... OMG - Hermione's just as bad as I was for letting sex-secrets slip out! ROFLMAO

Whoever invented those HIDEOUS hospital gowns should be hung, drawn, quarted, burned and whatever's left fed to vultures. They are the height of indiginity and the whole 'one size fits all' is rubbish - I was trying to hold the back closed and not trip over the fact it was too long. I was SO not impressed. Lucius has his head switched on if he's brought her something nice to wear to recover in.

That's FAR too rich for someone who's had nothing for a week. Though, the elves are as much as in love with her as the wizards. Awww.

Shouldn't it be MEN I love - though, that would be too confusing for Harry, as the love is so very special and so very different. That's better an apology once she's concious and able to understand him. You always apologise or spill your soul when it's too late when someone's so ill - and it serves you right because you should say things like that when they can hear you properly.

A wonderful chapter, and it had me in tears. Been there, done that (from in the bed and next to it) - and it was all too real for me.

I can't even give it a rating out of ten - as it would be an insult to something so convincingly written and well put together to do so.

person cnor9602
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good Lord, I love this story. The three of them just go so well together. I can't help but smile at the way she forgave Harry. It was just so 'Hermione' of her. Another wonderful chapter down and I still can't wait for more.
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! She woke up!! I adore her sense of humor, truly, i'd have to agree with draco, she is funny normally, but on drugs she was hilarious.... hmmm, it was obvious from part one that lucius was an arse man =) but draco too (I want more Draco!!) yummy, that man is walking temptation!!

What witch wouldn't prefer the attention of two devoted wizards to see to her every need? Who needs nurses when you've got Sev and Lucius to take care of you.

I knew she'd forgive Harry, he is an idiot, but thats something she has always known!

Brilliant as usual!!!

Love
Lady B
xoxoxo
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yea! Hermione's awake and being attended to by her lovely Slytherins. I knew you wouldn't let her die because necrophelia is just shudders UGH!

As for Harry...damn it! Hermione should have made him grovel. But I guess that's just not in her nature, sometimes I think she is too Gryffindor for her own good.

Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one (perhaps Lucius & Severus will take Hermione up on her drug induced suggestions. LOL) Can't wait!
MHS