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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very lovely :) Please update soon, I really want to see what's going to happen!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In my honest opinion, yes, it has a lot of potential. However, I find it distracting when the story is "narrated" rather than told (or painted) and the "voice" talks to the reader. It takes away from the story itself.
I.E. "I don
I.E. "I don
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to see where you take this, so I vote yes for a second chapter.
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really thinkk thi needs more! lots more chapters! like a minimun of 10 or something! update now!!!
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, now that I started reading it, I want to see it through to the end. It has it's own personality to it. Please post some more.
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i find this to be very interesting i really encourage you to keep writing and i hope to see an update soon. ^_^