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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh! lovely chappies!!!!! go on my dear! this is turning out to be a great story. i like the style of your writing and building of characters. don't you think fenny needs to be more dominating and alpha-ish? update soon luv!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved the new chapter!!!! can't wait to read the next one!!!!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I say do the scene.. if it's not perfect oh well.
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you joking???? You can't leave it out! Please write on!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Write a chapter about it!! I love it!! More please!!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, the first option
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I choose the first option! I like how your story is going, though yeah, the beta part would be nice too.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow not what I expected it to be very nice. Look forward to the next chapter.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i'm so happy to see an update so soon some take like three weeks to update, and let me tell you its madding, anyways love the chapter the story seems to be going very well. i hope to see an update soon. ^_^
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
looking good.