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for Refuge Has Its Price

by VictoriaPrince

schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how your doing the story.Even though Rodophuls sure is one bad dude and I can't wait for Severus to get his hands on him and Grabbe!I can't wait for the next chapter and hope you can update soon!
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy what you've written so far and I'm anticipating what will happen next. I'm glad that it looks like we'll be seeing more Hermione and Severus, but in truth I was liking the interludes with Luna and Voldemort. You made her in character, while showing her fear that any normal girl would have in the situation. Also, that was the first Voldemort lemon I have ever read and I enjoyed it immensely!
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello luv -- this is an experiment. You know I love the story, so I don't really have to write a review for you... do I? Anyhow, like I said, this is just me tinkering with the mechanisms to see what the buttons do.

Oh, Complain to that nice Admin that when people leave reviews that it never shows what chapter they are writing about! That's just plain rude.

DH
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schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well that was a great chapter now we can move on to some really good stuff. ;) like explanion-at least for hermiones benfit. and other moving forward progress. i wonder how ginny is doing and how things will go for lucius and severus moving on with some women in there lives. i cant wait for hermiones reaction to all this!!! :) do update soon!
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chapter and what a twist having Harry in Voldemorts head.I hope the next chapter has more SS/Hg action though!Keeep up the good work.
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made me want to cry!I loved every word of it though!
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
of curse Luna would be scared who would'nt be?after all Volde does look like a snake!And lets not forget his mean ways.I always thought Luna and Harry should be given the chance to be togeather!But of course if I had my way Severus would still be alive and married to Hermione.
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that I love this story so far!Lately alot of the fan fics seem to be lacking the felling that thay actually believe that what there writing could actually happen.I don't get that felling with your story,it reminds me of some of the older great SS/HG fan fics(before we knew the sad fate of our loved ones).I like the Voldemort Luna twist to I would have never thought of that but it works.I guess as you can tell my favorite pairing is SS/HG. Got to love Severus!Thank you for the story us die hard SS/HG fans have all been waiting for it!
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schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i highly doubt any of you did anything 'wrong'. well i now am very interested in this elriwrith (?) power that luna has. :) i rather liked your take on how patriachal the wizarding world is. sometimes it is fun to make things so primal. :) okay so what is up next for all our 'lovers'? i did love the chapter. so update soon! :)
person Apryl
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"creepy-crawly feelings", a rather accurate way of defining what it feels like to be a kid who has experienced adult sexuality. Despite feeling wrong one can't help but like it. Poor kid. I love your sense of humor- all sarcasm and wit. You mention Alan Rickman as helping the oppressed. I don't follow his personal life but I know he is involved with the NAS. Is this what you are referring to? You kinda gave me a clue by writing in Draco as autistic. This is the first fanfic I've read that mentions autism. Do you know someone on the spectrum?