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Very Intricate! I like this very much, and will eagerly wait for the next chapter.

Just enough technical detail to call up several times I've been in the emergency room with injured friends and relatives. I like the use of time as almost another enemy for Snape to fight in her honor as he heals her. Waiting breathlessly for the next instalment!

Is this a repost of something you've done elsewhere? I like it very much and can't wait for more.

Chapter 14 was very interesting, I am thinking of two things with old Lucius is he pretending being a true death eater or am I wishing for something not there. Looking forward to more interesting stories

Of course severus and Hermione should be togeather!We all know that even if we don't get our way.I always love it when in a story Severus tells Hermione shes his.I guess deep down every women wants to be owened by a man like him!keep up the good work,hope you can update soon!

Chapter 14 was excellant. I love how you wrote Hermione as such a survivor and so determined. I'm thrilled that you haven't turned Severus into a love spewing cream puff like some authors do. I think you've got him down pact with his quiet mysterious demeanor and that tenderness lying just beneath the surface. I'm really looking forward to reading how you make the relationship between these two unfold. So fare well and fantastic job well done.

I'm sorry but you need to explain to me why he felt the need to be so cruel and sadistic. He made her drink whiskey which made her cough with broken ribs??? Why?? He couldn't give her a pain potion instead? I thought he wanted her to eventually want him. This was not the way to begin that journey. He didn't act like that to Luna, Neville or Ginny. I am so ready to kick ass and take names later. There better be some severe groveling on the floor apology or some retribution for Hermione from him at some point.

Please accept my apology for not reviewing sooner. This is a fantastic story. I know that this will be a Snape/Hermione story (which is my fav pairing), but I'm really enjoying the "setting of the stage" so to speak. It gives a richer texture and a greater depth that is making your story so realistic. You have some unique and original ideas. Luna's character is great. Wonder of wonders you've even created a some dimension to Bella, not to mention Harry and little Tommy inside of Voldy's mind. So don't stop. I'd love to see an epic the size of "Gone With the Wind". This is shaping up to be a story that feels like a complete, complex world that I can get lost in and pretend I'm a part of. It will definitely be a "favorite" of mine.

That was a good chapter!I hope Luna makes it through everything o.k.Severus really does have a dark side.I like how Harry talked to Tommy.

I have never thought of Lord Volemort as hot,but man was he ever hot!I felt like I was right there.So my answer is,,,,that was some great lemons!I hope you have Hermione and Severus next,hes my dream you know.