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for Un Désire Dangereux *COMPLETE*

by FemmeBono

person Marbil
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was even hotter than the first one. I will have to make sure my husband takes his Viagra tonight so I can find my own release after reading that.
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good to know I'm not the only person who answers reviewers in the review section. :)

I knew this story was going to be worth the read and you so didn't disappoint me. Love the idea for the workings of the curse and the course it takes. Frankly I'm a bit shocked that Bellatrix would do such a thing and am enjoying trying to work out why she would do it. Jealousy, revenge, a cunning ploy to strike out at witches AND wizards around her???? I'm intrigued. Loving this!!
person Anon
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great start to what appears to be a very interesting story. Very intriguing that the faux mark kicked in the moment she started thinking of Sev in a sexual manner (not that I could blame her for that one). LOL I look forward to more.
person Marbil
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The only one I figured out on my own was the 'cold fish'. Regardless of what her conscious mind thinks of him, her body thinks differently, he already has her hormones all riled up.
person Marbil
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like a version of the
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
re: Dreamweaver
Glad you like it thus far; naturally there will be many lemons, as he does deliver! ;) Her reaction to him is important, too.

re: Trickie
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person Marbil
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do thik that I would enjoy being a victim of that curse if he were the one to help ease it's effects. I really did enjoy that lemon.

The story I referred to is 'A Rock and a Hard Place' by Ink Stained Wretch, it's one of my favorite stories and I'm sure you will love it.
http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600016237

Did you get the picture of Snape in a Hawiian shirt I sent?
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"I do thik that I would enjoy being a victim of that curse if he were the one to help ease it's effects. I really did enjoy that lemon." Aye caramba! No kidding. He has barely sampled our little French