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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 12 & 13))
Thanks for the explanation onf a "targeted occlumens".
Thanks also for not going into more detail with Harry and Voldemort's.....encounter. Yeah...what you had was more than enough. Very well written, and I can't wait to see where you're going with this, but...yeah. And poor Draco having to witness it. Even though he knew it wasn't "his" Harry, I'm sure he'll never get that image out of his head. I'm not sure I will either, come to that. Squicky, but well written.
Update soon!
Thanks for the explanation onf a "targeted occlumens".
Thanks also for not going into more detail with Harry and Voldemort's.....encounter. Yeah...what you had was more than enough. Very well written, and I can't wait to see where you're going with this, but...yeah. And poor Draco having to witness it. Even though he knew it wasn't "his" Harry, I'm sure he'll never get that image out of his head. I'm not sure I will either, come to that. Squicky, but well written.
Update soon!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad Draco kept it together! Sooo need chapter 15!!!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 14)
You are so fabulous with the updates!
Although it would have been understandable if he hadn't, given what he witnessed, I was so glad that Draco was able to step up and give Harry the love and comfort he needed after what his evil self put him through. I hope he can continue to do so.
This is a great story and I can't wait for the next update!
You are so fabulous with the updates!
Although it would have been understandable if he hadn't, given what he witnessed, I was so glad that Draco was able to step up and give Harry the love and comfort he needed after what his evil self put him through. I hope he can continue to do so.
This is a great story and I can't wait for the next update!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww poor harry, this cant be good for one mind lol
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapters 10 & 11)
I liked it that Harry chose "Draco" as his secret word, but I have to say, in all honesty, the end part of Chapter 11, with Harry eagerly sucking on Voldemort's tongue...eww!....totally squicked me!
Having said that, I still want to know what happens, and am looking forward to the next update.
I liked it that Harry chose "Draco" as his secret word, but I have to say, in all honesty, the end part of Chapter 11, with Harry eagerly sucking on Voldemort's tongue...eww!....totally squicked me!
Having said that, I still want to know what happens, and am looking forward to the next update.
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your 'targeted Occulmens' is definitely a fascinating concept. I'm glad you explained it further, because otherwise Harry's change in behavior could have been confusing. When I read it, I was like "wow, he's a hell of an actor." It seemed highly unlikely, but your post script explanation made everything make a lot more sense and seem more believable. Good stuff!
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 12!!! What is this plan? Sooo need more!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooohh.....i dont even have anything to say to these last chapters.....well ok maybe....yum works pretty well for most lol!(evil harry....is hott harry)
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh god. O_O
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know it's evil of me to leave it hanging like that, but I promise to post another chapter tomorrow. I'm really excited by all the great reviews I'm getting and appreciate you guys for taking the time to let me know what you think of the story.