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schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How Lily knew that Artie's not Luke's son? i now think i like Lily better than Drew like some people here too lol. Glad that they finally found the shell portkey to Bermuda too, haha.

okay, i think all chapter now is great and keep going :)
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
: O


..dun dun dun..

Dude, so not a nice cliffhanger. I'm totally rooting for Lily, though, shes and Luke are just so much better together. And Scorpius and the potion, and being suck a jerk to Persephone? I just don't like it one bit. She ought to have slapped him 'cross the face. :| More more more please????
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi jenny its me the anon that reviewed u I think 5 times in one night. Thank u so much for the compliment I really apreciate it. I love this new chapter its amazing.hw will draco and blaise help luna and the kids. Poor persephone and scorpious how will their marriage survive. By the way my name is mariah and keep ur faith in the readers and they will show their love of ur stories. Try to update soon.
Bye
person Apple
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay another chapter! Draco and Jessie are so cute together. I really hope Luke isn't getting manipulated to drop the custody hearing but I have a feeling that he is. I'm glad you found my last review funny your stories have been my biggest distraction all summer followed by dynonugget's stories. I swear fanfics are the only thing that are going to get me through the last 2 weeks of my summer classes...then I have to go back to college after a 2 week break:( I love the Broomsticks stories and I can't wait for your next update to distract me :D
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:) I'm so so glad you decided to keep posting here! I really like this turn of events, I can't wait to see how Persephone handles all the slutty girls throwing themselves at Scorps. And I agree with Lily, I think Drew is just using him, she has ulterior motives. More, please!!
person Lux
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please please get rid of Drew, she's like an evil pyschophant. I want Lily and Luke to get together so badly,
I mean Drew is just like a first love, I mean Luke doesn't necessarily have any obligations to stay with her...

is draco going to have to arrest hermione???
person Apple
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Drew's gone off the deep end! I really hope that Luke and Lilly get together they seem like a much better match to me. I hope Hermione doesn't get caught...how dumb is Oliver to put a shell portkey on the beach! This story is really addicting and I'm glad you updated twice today :D
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow sooo loved it!
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi its me again
I love the new chapter its amazing
Keep updating
Will their be anymore stories to this series.believe in the readers and they will show they love u.
Bye
person nymphbot
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is persephone going to seduce draco!