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AAAH poor draco i just want to hug him..... way to go nathaniel flying as a large raven how very cool.... wow you go hermione now she is sounding very similar to what she was like in the second edition to this series... they have definitely messed with the wrong witch...

OMG i do not even know where to start... i just love how you write.... one minute we think one thing then the next you have us going in a total different direction but i believe that you once said that things are not as the always seem...... love what you are doing with luke... i love his personality.... and i like that you have dragged damien into this story as well nice... oh and scorpius and sapphire(i am just going to call her my his nickname for her bc i always forget how to spell it when i get to the reviews.) they are a great little match i love that he is now with someone a lot like his mom and i remember in the 4 th installment( i think? please forgive me if i am wrong, i am sitting at my computer typing this review trying to name them in my head, but i believe it was broomsticks and the big apple yes it was but i am not sure if that is # 4 or 5 any way) when him and draco were in the library and he had to pick a girl and draco pointed to someone a lot like hermione and scorpius went for someone else... i think it is funny that he is now married to that type of girl.... but they have some heavy issues a drug addiction... oh and hermione is great in this as always and she is definitely taking more of a main role in this story.... poor draco thought she was cheating well it is good that they have such a close connection..... the wizard gauntlet is brilliant... and i can not believe that they are about to get caught oh how horrible... great job by the way

ooh great chapter. wow the Guntlet was awesome. very creative!! i cannot wait to read more!

wow, i love those 2 chaps! really exciting and adventure lol yeah, yeah i really love that! cant wait for next chap, as u said it would be the huge one! keep updating!!! plz!! :)

have a good day!

Hey again jenny its mariah I love this new chapter its so cute and the sex scene AMAZING poor draco he so cares for jessie.how will blaise live in america? I love that you put luke and lily together they are so cute. If u are going to do another story in this series what will it be about? If not what will ur next story be? You are a amazing writer.
Believe in the readers and they will show they love u.
Update soon
your humble reader
Mariah

muahahahahaha! that's really hilarious! How they can explain that situation? lol may be they have to use truth potion or pensive to prove it! Persephone was really funny & a bit naive haha...i think that fertility potion must have something to do with her later! eh...but i wonder why they just couldn't appearate away from under there? well i'm a bit confuse why Draco had to clog open that -_-'

okay keep updating...i have to go to bed, it's 3 am here now lol cya when i wake up to read more!

haha, that's ridiculous what Persephone confessed to Draco lol i like how everything between Drew & Luke went better than i thought. Such a big surprise to see Harry & Ginny and especially Ginny pregnant again lol now Draco knew about Gauntlet but i really wanna know how they can get out from that bastard...he planned to ruin reputation of him by using his daughter in law...can't believe Pansy would involve too coz in the third story she seemed to be good and didn't have any issue about blood anymore but i was wrong lol

okay, enjoy the beach! waiting for ur next update :)

I'm glad Persephone is standing up for herself and hopefully Scorpius will realize he's being an idiot and lose the potion. Based on his character though I'm gonna bet that Luke (or their parents) will have to make him see his stupidity. I'm glad Luke and Drew have sorted things out without things turning ugly. I'm eagerly waiting for the next update to see how the discussion about the Gauntlet goes.

lol what a mess! i guess Luke gonna know his mind so soon which witch he like now. anyway i still wonder how Drew will handle the truth she didn't even know.

this chap really has so many things going on like teenagers dealing with emotion issue and such lol but next chap i hope to read more about Gauntlet! i couldn't believe Harry turned a shell into a portkey and Wood put it on the beach? uh...

keep updating!

Hey jenny its mariah again beautiful new chapter
Scorpious is a pain potion junkie OH NOOO!!!! I feel for luna's little girl jesse.
Omg poor draco and persephone captured and stuck in a dungeon. How will the family find out their gone.
I can't believe draco had to listen to persephone saying that.
Oh you nuaghty girl you.update soon. believe in the readers and they will show their love of your work.
Bye