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schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! love this chap very, very much!!! like how Luke and Lily made out, haha & Hermione on solicitor action :D i'm a law student myself and court is kinda my life since i was born (my family is lawyer family lol) okay, get to the point, i really love that!!! can't wait to see Scorpious's campaign :)

have a good day!
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, more, please please please?!
This was a great chapter! Go kick some ass, 'Mione! Set your Dragon free! :D
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very great chaps! such an adventure! really love this especially the scene of Ron and his car, and Nathaniel. Keep going!
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey jenny its mariah this chapter was great. Poor draco all disheveled its so upsetting. I love the new hermione she looks like she can kick ass. Nathaniel is so cool. Poor luke slaving away in the basement and scorp and persephone planning a rally all by them selves. When ewill drew tell damien the truth about the baby. Update soon.
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schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!!! I can't wait for a new chapter, I'm dying to know how Draco does, and how Mione and Nathanial and everyone can help get him out.
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow awesome chapter!!!!
wonderful job! cannot wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Her its mariah amazing 13th chapter . I loved it
Poor draco all alone in the house.
Belive in your readers and they will show they love u.update soon
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey its mariah again
I just read the 14th chapter and it was amazing.will luna and the kids get out ok?I love the fairies.they seem so pretty.I just read it cuase I just got breaking dawn at midnight so yea
Update soon
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person smmz79
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well the one thing that i have to say about you and your stories is that they are NEVER dull..... i am always sitting on the edge of my seat thinking what the hell is she taking us through now... do not get me wrong i love every minute of it... I just want to say thank you for foreshadowing the azkaban thing i know i would have been freaking out if i had not known it was coming.... and i am glad that you got hermione and nathienal going to rescue draco instead of sitting and waiting like the others when has hermione ever sat and waited... ok so that is all i can think of ohh no i loved that draco was carrying hermione through the mud bc he thought she was wearing her wedding dress that was rich.... ok seriously update bc i have to know how they get draco out of this i am sure it will be interesting and keep us on the edge of our seats
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey jenny its mariah thank u so much for the compliment. This was an amazing chapter.
Poor draco now in azkeban its so upsetting. Poor little jessie how will she take not being with her uncle draco. Nathaniel is so fucking cool that he can transform into a raven I love it.how will dracos kids handle the new that their father is in jail.well I love this chapter udate soon possibly asap.will u make another story in this series it would be wonderful if u did butr no pressure.
Believe in the readers and they will show they love you and this story.
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