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person smmz79
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEAHHH he is out... oh i hope he can help roman... and way to go lucius, sr. LOVE IT and love scorpius and persephone(spelling?)
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg! lots of incidents there! can't believe you wrote such a very big scene so good! i also wanna know about how will Draco help Roman from Azkaban...and can't wait for next chap! this is the best chap ever i must say!
person koneko-chan
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoo hoo! Draco's out of Azkaban! I like this last chapter, and I am looking forward to the next one. I'm really interested to see what you're going to do with the next story too.
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh...can't wait for the end!! arg...u kill me!
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No no no no no you can't stop there!!! Next chapter, please, hurry!! That is such an awful cliffie, you shoul make sure the next chappy is extra long to make up for it. Haha. Just please update again soon!
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that's sooo hot lol finally Luke discovered cause of increasing squib population...can't wait for next chap! Wanna read about Scorp's concert now!!! plz!!
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter... keep up the wonderful work.. cannot wait to read more!!1
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey jenny its mariah the new chap was amazing. Draco so hot. Will there be another story at the end of this.well love this keep writing. Believe in the readers and they will show their love. Bye for now
person Apple
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter! I love your story and how you area able to keep multiple characters stories going in each chapter and keep them all tied together. Thank you for such a wonderful distraction you've kept me from throwing my computer out the window these last few weeks :D fortunately my classes end on Friday so I get a 2 week break! Yippy!
person smmz79
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG what a great chap.... i love it i can not believe this is almost over... i love the way you write draco and hermione... i think you mentioned in one of the earlier chaps that you were thinking about adding on to the scorpion kiss/dark fire stories... i think you should those tho were great as well... ok so i loved the end of this hermione and dracos love making was sooo sweet and it told of their love... and natheniel is a tricky little thing... oh and my fave line in this chap was.. when scorpius and luke were talking about blowjobs and luke was negative about them and scorpius was like just wait you will be begging for one one day and then you will know that women have your nuts in a vice that was rich