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Is Bella gonna get togehter with the new doc???

i would love to know more since now some random lesbian doctor has hermione as a cousin but didn't know that her cousin use to go out with the crazy bellatrix lol

Your story is Great!!! And I truly cannot wait to see where it goes now that you've left us with such an interesting cliff hanger!!!! And I thank you for writing this story, there isn't alot of non-super dark Bella/Hermione stories out there. Since Bella/Hermione is one of my absolute fav pairings in HP. Pleas update as soon as you're able!!!! Thank you again for sharing your story with us!!!

Mekia

this is... surprisingly cute o.o

Sometimes how Bella phrases things don't make a lot of sense and kinda distract from the story at hand. For example where she demands that Hermione "make her orgasm", there's plenty of synonyms that work just as well without her sounding like she's a scientist demanding a procedure or a junkie demanding a specific drug. Unless, of course, that's how you want to portray her, in which case I can understand that.

Other than that, this whole story has so far pleasantly surprised me. I haven't read part 3 yet but I will when I can ^.^

Your story seems pretty intriguing so far but I really just can't buy Bella/Hermione in the least.

this is very good please continue

Do continue...