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Is that poem from Holes?

In chapter six when you're talking about Harry trying to get into the minestry you spelled somthing wrong. You said there was a "cue" or a line for the visitors entrance. The correct spelling for it, if you mean line, is 'queue'. The funny thing is the only reason i know that is by reading Anita Blake Books, by Laurell K Hamilton. Which you should look into.

Other than the little mistake, I love the fic and think your writing is wonderful, its nice to see an actual writer on here insted of amatures. Your stuff comes off as being experienced in a way many others do not. I love the long chapters and though i am only on chapter six i look forward to seeing what happens.

Wonderful story, very engaging. I especially liked Draco with wings :)
If no one has said it yet, the rhyme in chap 13 is from the book/movie 'Holes'
Great Work!
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don't worry. i was cursing you a whole lot. you made up for it though. i would have been even more happy if you had put in the second bonding session but i'm sure i will live. well done!

Sooo need chapter 13!!! Though I'm not ready for this to end!!

i don't blame you at all for being reluctant to read LotR. its bloody boring in my opinion. for people that have an excellent imagination, it is down right dule to read through whole pages devoted to the description of a tree or the like. the movies were much better than the books. i fell asleep with the books alot and it took me two months to read the three of them. for me that is pathetic. try the cliff notes version or the website. you could just use movie references only; that might be alittle easier. i remember enough that i could be helpful but if you have someone else that is more interested than it would be best to choose them. any way, if you need me my email is wingshinigami@gmail.com

love it. hope to read the last chapter.

Good chapter. Quick question: Why aren't werewolves allowed at Hogwarts anymore? I mean, yeah, there are obviously "bad" werewolves but I'm sure that Remus wasn't the only "good" werewolf in existence.
Anyway, keep going!

how can you say that you like the film adaptation of a movie without reading the books first? i think only fellowship of the ring was good; the other two movies sucked since they deviated away from the lotr books so much. but whatever, it's just my personal opinion, no flame intended.

Oh my goodness I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Hurm for a second I did feel a little bit of pitty for Ginny.
Oooh poor George, I hope he will be okay in the next chapter.
I shall keep this story on track! Loving it!