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by ladidaa

schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 3!!!
person lilly
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would definitely suggest that you you get a beta. Most of your grammar mistakes are minor, but there are many. Most of it is just capitalizing errors.
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 2!!!