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for Hermione pays her Debt

by neelix

schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If it's the end, why do you call it Part One ?????

Will there be more or is that it ?? No wedding scene ??

Really could use a little more maybe ? It is really good, how about an epilogue to tie it all together ?????
person KellyJCR
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There better be more soon you tease!!!!!
person Angie30
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love it!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I certainly hope that there are at least a couple more chapters to come before you end it. Keep going. I loved the first story and I love what I have read so far about this one. Don't stop now.