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for Line Between Nightmare and Dream

by luvlivsmile

schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to the next chapter. I hope that Hermione does go see Lucius and apologize to him.
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! Ch. 20 is very well done; lots of emotions and Amycus gets marched naked through his snooty colleagues as his wife hires a lawyer! Now, if Lucius gets a chance to explain what he was doing, (away from Harry's ears) and not get arrested, things could get interesting! Loved it.
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I think that since that plan that Samantha was helping Lucius with is finished now, that maybe she will talk to Hermione and apologize to her. Samantha could tell Hermione that Lucius doesn't love anyone other than Hermione and that it was her fault that Hermione saw what she did at the manor. I look forward to reading more.
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter:) although I'm not sire Draco would call lucius " pops" LOL
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I hope that Lucius will be able to talk to Hermione about what happened so that they can still be together. I look forward to the next chapter to see what happens.
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Samantha certainly surprised both Lucius and Hermione. What a mess that created. I'm sure Lucius will get it cleaned up (or we wouldn't have a story lol). Lucius certainly dropped a bit of his Slytherin teachings allowing himself to be surprised and so emotional from Samantha's actions and Hermmione's responce, however I think it may be a good thing as none of them are in school anymore.

schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I look forward to the next chapter :)
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now the only question I have is wether Hermione will add 2 & 2 togerther and get the right answer. I just love Slytherin scheeming!
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful chapter.
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job, thoughtful, provocative and quite well written.