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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, love bites, doesn't it? It was a wonderful piece and I'm thankfull that you wrote it. It's sad and it's true. Or as Bono says: You can only feel your own pain. That's just as true for Moine as it is for Lucius. What a pity that some lovers never get together and all that remains is hurt.
LOL, Alex
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: Mrs_Helene_Snape Father Figure

That was wonderful! I LOVE that song!! this is so exciting! Thank you for accepting the challenge and doing it so beautifully!!!

Happy Writing!
SG
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LadyVoldemort87.....Beautifully written, poppet! I absolutely adore a smitten Lucius. Your descriptions were spot on (as usual) and i think the song choice was absolutely perfect!!! Well Done, My Lady!!


Love
LadyB
xoxo
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SG....

Wow, very very bittersweet, fighting the attraction. giving inand knowing that they'll never have the chance to truly be able to be together. Heartbreaking really.....So narcissa and Draco know? you've left an open ended story....Narcissa can jump off a bridge for all i care, but i think i shall be the one to give draco all the love he needs...LOL brilliantly done!

Love
Lady B
xoxo
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mrs_Helene_Snape....

what a wonderful story...I adore that song by George Michael. Forgiveness is a powerful tool. i am glad hermione was able to forgive lucius...it gave her the happy ending she needed and the strength to move forward with her life. Well Written!!

LadyB
xoxo
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bloody brilliant! A joy to read!

Loved it!

V x
person SoftObsidian74
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Question: Does Hermione have to be of age? What are your squicks?


Damn you...I'm not even a Lucius/Hermione writer and this is too fun to pass up...
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dammit I spelled response wrong LOL, but my offering is up! Enjoy!
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! The first response within hours of the challenge being issued!!! I love it!!!