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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 28

Woohoo! So how is Snape going to tame Pansy? You have me all curious now. Of course, Snape needs taming too I think. They are kind of like Beast and Beast. LOL
You really have an interesting combination here and the funny thing, I would have never thought of it. LOL

I have to laugh at all the little role play and sex games Hermione and Lucius plays. They are too cute with each other!

I guess I am all caught up now. Darn. :(
I love this story though, hon! Great job
person mlui
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Snape and Pansy? I didn't see that coming. Great chapters and please update again! =)
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 28: Snape
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pansy and Snape? I don't know how to take that....Oh!Lucius Malfoy is getting A little high handed.One would think Hermione would fight to stay on even footing with him.It seems she is losing the core of herself just because she fell in love. Lucius is treating her like a child..Be good or I'll spank you and hello,she's allowing it because he's great in bed? Please don't get me wrong I love your story however I always thought true love built you up, not cover your essence.Even if she becomes a little more Hermione and a little less sexbot,Malfoy will still giver her great sex.He liked her fire,felt more alive..what happened?
person MegNutz
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW IT I KNEW IT!!!! lol great chapter can't wait for the next one keep up the good work.
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a brilliant update, I had a wonderful time reading it:-))
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pansy and Snape? I suppose I should have seen that one coming, but I didn't. And Lucius all buttoned up, what fun to turn him loose! Lovely chapter!
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well at least I made you laugh. lol I knew it was Pansy! I knew it! Yeah me. :-) And, the two of them are going to be the funniest couple ever. And, the role playing...yum! Thanks, hon!
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I managed to miss your last update! Very irresponsible of me!

Adorable chapter, I was pretty much cackling when Lucius was wearing Severus-style robes. That is pretty much the hottest image you could have come up with, I'm certain.

And Hermione in Slytherin colours had me giggling as well. Poor girl didn't know what hit her (oh, bad pun).

As for your response to my last review re: Vanity Fair, glad that you're thinking about picking it up. It's long and involved but a worthy read if you can find the time, though if you asked me, I'd rather you write more chapters than spend time expanding your literary horizons! But I won't hold it against you to want some time to relax. Promise.

Oh, and thank you for your kind reviews on my work. I've been writing like crazy, and was so thrilled to see your name in my review section. Kind of like being reviewed by Charlotte Bronte...okay, crazy stalker-style comments will end now! LOL

person vbruce
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gods, I love it when I'm right. Enjoyed the role playing in this one.