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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

person smmz79
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
fabulous chap very very hot as well yummy
person smmz79
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this chap i love severus and lucius' relationship the way they interract with each other it is great and i am glad that hermione was able to see that i think that hermione is in love with her hubby
person smmz79
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the last couple of chaps were great.. i love that lucius is making her explore her sexual side... i love an open minded ginny.... great chap
person smmz79
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg ha ha ha i love it she definitely keeps lucius on his toes.... i love the hermione you have written here she is soooo strong willed and very stubborn but look who her hubby is.... so the chase is on.... again.....
person smmz79
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow i have just started to read this fic and i am totally interested in it i mean i love the way you have come about the marriage law idea.... and i love hearing about how lucius feels aboout this esp since it is common to hear hermiones side first love love love it so far
person smmz79
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow this is going to be good well that old saying sticks for hermione.... she doesnot go down without a fight.... i can not wait to see what he makes of her outfit and the gum!!!!
person smmz79
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok so i know that they are not in a sexual relationship 'yet' but that chasing and fighting had to be erotic that and some great foreplay!!!!!
person smmz79
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
way to go hermione keep him on his toes.....
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26

I have to say, I don
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27

Well I have to admit, I have cheated, so I know who Snape has been paired with. LOL
I am dying of curiosity to see how this is going to turn out. I couldn