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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it Love it Love it ... Perfect ending.. I hope the epilogue is funny... that would make it more special..
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm actually sitting here with a huge smile on my face, so I can safely say I fully enjoyed that chapter. It was lovely, simply lovely. Thank you! HG4eva
person smmz79
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you gotta love cool whip how yummy is that visual lucius bond to the bed with chocolate sauce and cool whip yumm... great job i absolutely love lucius and hermiones relationship esp the way you have written it and i love severus and hermione together they are wuite funny.... great job as always i am trying to get to the last chap you have posted so i can move onto restless i have been dying to read it
person smmz79
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ha ha so severus got him a spitfire i love it... and draco is so funny i love reading about him and lucius great chap i love the side plot of severus
person smmz79
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVED this chap way to go severus he is so hot when he is all bossy... ok so that was a great little role play scene if lucius was a professor i would be in detention with him everyday.. love this story can not wait to read more.... :-)
person smmz79
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow what a great chap..... so he caught her snooping of course he did stage it so she would have her interest peaked.... so you have someone in mind for sevvie poo well it would have to be someone to keep him on his toes as well as someone that was not very shallow.... great job!!!!
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I found out about your story through LJ. I didn't expect a Hermione and Lucius marriage law story but was pleasantly surprised. I'm usually a die hard sshg fan but I'm enjoying your story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person smmz79
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i just love reading the parts where hermione baits severus he is prickly that was very funny.... and lucius holding the baby how sweet is that
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot, Spicy and Funny .... All around perfect.. keep them coming..
person smmz79
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow she is soo confused... so they were wrapped in a golden light there at the end it sounds like draco and susanah had the same light i think it is bc they are mutually in love or maybe have found their soulmate