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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

person wicraven
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I reallly looooved this chapter, I'm still laughing...Hermione's great, I can't believe old luci lasted as long as he did, can't wait for the next chapter, hope it's soon, I'll be looking for it...thanks.
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to see Lucius' reaction to Hermione's outfit when she gets to the Manor. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My, my, isn't that a look? I'm sooooo curious about Lucius' reaction to her style. I guess he will boil like water in a kettle. Lovely! He deserves this little ugly display of her dislike. Can't wait for the next chapter.
LOL, Alex
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an arrogant prat, isn't he? And so damn sexy and masculine. Oh god, how I wish my test would match with his. I'm curious what's up next. Thanks for this chapter. I was stuffed with loads of emotions and a nice read.
LOL, Alex
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am not so patiently waiting the next installment of this delicious piece of fiction. I like it, more than like it, I dare say I love it. I have to say that your story is the first that I've read where Lucious maintains his haughty attitude to a T. So far I can't stand him and I sympathize greatly with Hermione so I'm now doubly excited to see where everything will lead from the second chapter. I'll definitely keep my eye on this one.

Happy writing!
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't believe that Lucius is threatening to get Hermione fired if she doesn't marry him. I look forward to reading more to see what happens.
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh you have to love a defiant Hermione, otherwise she wouldn't be the Hermione we all know and love.

Keep the updates coming.
person kitty08
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow a very good start and i hope you will update soon!!!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.