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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great! You know I've always been a firm believer that Hermione and Lucius have very good sexual chemistry. I mean, can you imagine all the super hot angry sex? Not to mention the make up sex? lol I can't wait for more!!
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story so far, your writing is excellent and a joy to read. I can't wait to read more!
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was torn between laughing and gasping in horror when Lucius set all of her clothes on fire! (It was a bit of a strange sound that ended up coming out) I am not too torn up about it though as of course, it means she has to get all new, fabulous clothing to take its place. Wow, what a hardship that is going to be. Glad to see that Hermione did end up doing herself up nicely for the wedding. You know it's a good sign when your future son-in-law, who is your age no less, thinks you look gorgeous. Go Hermione!
P.S. For some reason loved the line where Lucius said "Temper Poppet"....*fans self*...I am weird, I know. LOL
P.S. For some reason loved the line where Lucius said "Temper Poppet"....*fans self*...I am weird, I know. LOL
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6: Well, the fight may be on, but the combatants look like they will both win in the end (my favorite kind of story).
The wizard may be beautiful, but he needs lessons in tact. He never learned the aphorism,
The wizard may be beautiful, but he needs lessons in tact. He never learned the aphorism,
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chapter! I'm interested to see what's going to happen on the wedding day!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: This story may be about a classic idea, the Marriage Law, but you've handled it spectacularly so far. I adore your crafty Slytherin Lucius. And giving us a complete view of Hermione, with her dusty personality and desire to burrow into obscurity in juxtaposition to Lucius, who has landed on his elegantly shod feet as usual...well, I'm very intrigued and want to begin Chapter 2 now. Excuse me, please. Great job!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: I like how you give us a detailed understanding of Hermione
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: Yay! Hermione is starting to find a way to fight back. Mr. Snobby Malfoy isn
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4: Malfoy Manor is beautiful, but its formality makes it a bit cold. I hope Hermione hots it up one way or another. I like the description of his library. I