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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the humor, please update soon!
person Citten
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!! an update! well the race is on! i cant wait to see what he does when he catches her! ;) my personal oppion though she is just a little too stubborn for me, why cant she just be greatful for the gifts and accept them--though i have no problem with telling him they are not neccessary. (i would like to evenually like to know what was in the gift.) okay that is my two knots worth. :) also loved that lucius saw that she had been crying and was sweet enough to carry her into his bedroom, though if i can guess your lucius right she will not have that bed for very long if he has his way. :) which is fine with me! :) i am really looking forward to lots more and i do hope it is really soon.
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
giggles...that cant end well....
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! I've missed this story! I can't wait for more....I can't wait to see if Lucius catches Hermione....and what happens if he does....though I can hazard a guess. LOL Hope you update again soon!!
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: Hmmm, Lucius likes his flavors. Did he indulge outside his marriage to Narcissa? Or was it all before he married her? If so, he must have packed in quite a lot before he wed when he was young. Ah, or after Narcissa died? Frisky fellow!

What with the time-turner and assorted other
person jocat
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey I just found your story and have really enjoyed it so far. I love a strong Hermonie so this story really works for me. Looking forward to the next update.. Toodles
person Citten
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well at least she made him stop and think... even if it has only annoyed him more. :) i really want more of this and i am just going to enjoy it--whatever happens, i know it will be great! :) why is it that some men just dont get it--there are just somethings a woman likes to do for herself or that we like to be involed in decisions-together. well one thing i will say is i would like to see lucius' reaction to hermione's tears (i think i am trying to give you a suttle hit here-though the dicision is up to you.) i will be waiting for the next chapter, so PLEASE POST SOON!!!!! :)
person CoCoM
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, he is an arrogant arse, but what a SEXY arrogant arse, right? Right? *wink, wink*
It's okay that they got irritated with each other-that makes making up all that much better. They will have to learn to compromise, obviously. However, Lucius is Lucius and I don't see him totally giving up control for anyone.
Looking forward to another update soon.
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more to see if Lucius and Hermione can work past this little disagreement.