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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11: Hermione is playing with fire, to pit herself against Lucius.
Oh, my, you
Oh, my, you
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Lemon! Love that Hermonie was in charge. I thought you were going to give the big old deatheater the upper hand but you did not disappoint me YEAH.
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
neither can i!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) well i truely enjoyed that chapter! well he did not catch her unawares though he did try, you have to give him that. well maybe he might start to listen and not just dictate, we can only hope ;) i really loved his ending promise! i will be watching for that chapter. :) so what next, i wonder if he will remember his little conversation. post soon!
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I loved how Hermione tied Lucius up and had her way with him. I do agree that he should not dictate her life the way he does. He was the one that wanted to marry her and now he treats her like a possession instead of a wife. I hope that he will start treating her better now. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodness me, cold showers for all! Rowr.
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for your next chapter. I really want Hermonie to get the upper hand show Lucius a thing or two.......
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My vote is for Hermione. Lucius should decide if he has a wife or a child, he can't treat her as both, and if he prefer the child, shudders....
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10: Hermione
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooo! i smell a lemon coming??? 10/10 for the whole chappie