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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read 16 on the quidditch match. I love how it's going. Severus is getting a little more friendly...I wonder if he will have a bigger role?

Anyway, it was truly titillating the scene with Lucius when he tied Hermione up. I also love all the outfits you don lucius in...you clearly have an eye for fashion!
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story. Lucius is kind of sweet and nasty at the same time. Hermione is in character too.
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16: OMG, a black leather Lucius, especially his gloves. I WANT him. I
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17: Oh, I do love a devious Lucius. It makes him absolutely delicious to play with.
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15: Oh, I
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, another great update! I love how Hermione stands her ground with her Big Bad DeathEather, and at the same time I do enjoy that Lucius will never be a true submissive, somehow that makes him even sexier (and I think Hermione give him points for at least trying to pretend to be submissive, and find his basic lack of submissive boones in his body rather sexy:-))
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not exactly what I had in mind, possibly even better! Hee-hee! Lucius ahs control issues, too; he doesn't even want her to leave the house in case he wants to play, does he? Then again, with him around, why would any of us want to leave the house?
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more.
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!

I just finished up to now, and that's all I can say. I admit I like Lucius/Hermione pairings more than I thought I would.

As for pairing up Severus, it could get interesting. Luna, maybe?
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schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a very good chapter! :) but lucuius has been caught! :) now i really wonder what the experiment is that hermione is going to try now!!! :) i do hope that you will not leave us in the dark. cause i am going to go crazy! :)