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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THIS WAS HILARIOUS....
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it when she just says NO. I imagine she was very calm in saying that. Love that you didn't put any adjectives next to her "nos"-it leaves more to the imagination. Who needs a gym, when you can just run from Lucius all damn day then have hot steamy sex.
person Citten
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well i loved that chapter! ginny is very good. :) well the coming conversations are going to be great! cant wait until the next chapter. i would so love to be pampered--stupid hermione--i am with ginny on this one. PLEASE update soon!!!!!!! :)
person celesumi
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i just love lucius =D and i'm dying that hermione is trying to play coy with the big bad death eater! great update! i can't wait to see what happens next! happy holidays!
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 18: Oh, how cute. Lucius is playing with Hermione
person Byrony
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story.. I have to say that you have made Lucius quite sexy and charming.. I await your next chapter with anticipation.
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more.
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant update as always!
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! I loved the way you have them interacting with the changes the circumstances are forcing on them, as well as their changing emotions. Let me guess: Lucius is going to insist on personally testing their new products, each and every one, on Hermione? I can hardly wait!