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Thank you for the compliment on my username! I'm a huge literature fan, mostly the classics, mostly 19th century, and I remember saying to one of my professors that there is no beauty like literary beauty; and thus a username was born!

I loved this new chapter. I absolutely adore your depiction of Lucius, he is exactly as I picture him in my head. As always, love the story and my breath is bated for more!

really really good chapter!!!!

A wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more.

oooo...they are in love! gosh...i just can't get over how delicious baddie Lucius is! loved the impromptu spanking scene in the bathroom! i can just imagine Lucius confiscating Hermione's undies and putting them in his jacket pocket :) can't wait for the next chapter and what the golden light means :)!

I love dom Lucius to submissive Hermione. Oh yes, those games are beyond hot. This was a hot chapter for sure, the smexy smuttiness was so delicious. Find me a bathroom quick! LOL

However, there was also alot of emotion. I thought Hermione was going to get sloshed so she could numb herself. Glad you didn't go that route. She's so overwhelmed by what she feels its breaking my heart. Its so obvious that Lucius loves her - at least to the reader. Really, he's nearly obsessed with her. He wants her to be happy and not do with out, he wants to take care of her - overbearing yes but also amazingly sweet.

That glow is one of two things: pregnancy or sign of true love. Not sure which but I loved it.

That was great! I loved they way you delineated their emotions and the insecurities she was feeling. I can understand her confusion, and his need to reassure her through the most developed connection they have. As much fun as they've been having, sooner or later they actually are going to have to talk to each other, aren't they? Never mind me, I'm still fanning myself and trying to get my scrambled wits back in order, I found the chapter incredibly hot.

Fantastic new chapter! I love how Hermione spoils for a fight, I see so much of myself in how you portray her. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hermione's dress is incredible. I love it. I also love your story. Thanks for writing it.

This is excellent. I look forward to reading more.

Why do I get the feeling Hermione is about to get a lesson in why Lucius is a man to be reckoned with? I have a feeling he's going to teach (in a naughty way) his sweet wife a lesson and show her a side she hasn't seen of him yet (but will no doubt enjoy). Sigh, get dom Lucius in the room! :-)