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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooh perfect chapter - true love and hot sex - is there anything better? umm, yes, Lucius trussed up naked and just waiting to be played with! I just love this story so much.

Thanks for reviewing my hot dramione story, I have to admit I loved writing it. What is about those Malfoy men, eh?
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You continue making my boring day. Lol. Great story. I don't get bored of reading it when I don't have something fun to do. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon...in like a day. Lol. Great job! Especially the sex scenes and fluff in this chapter was utterly amazing. I wish I had a sexy EX deatheater. lol. Great job once again!

Lady Serpentina
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1

Finally I got to start reading this. I have been bombarded at work. :(
I just knew this was going to be good though. I love marriage law fics.

It seems poor Hermione has cut herself off from the world and has become a hermit. Doesn
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2

Mmmmm, so is that dream of the silver and green snakes a metaphor for being entangled with Lucius in bed? LOL
This is getting better!

Kingsley is rather an ass isn
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3

How funny, like father, like son. I love how they are sitting by the fire, drinking Firewhiskey in fancy tumblers, contemplating Miss Granger
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. please update soon.
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I've read this new year. I love it. You simply made my boring day. I wish I were in Hermione's shoes. Lucky witch. *saucy wink.* Lol. Great job! I have a question: is hermione going to have a blond little wizard anytime soon? Children are part of the contract...or twins? Great job! Update soon.

Lady Serpentina
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haven't seen Dangerous Beauty, I'll look out for it though! I'm a huge Jane Austen buff as well, though I must admit I prefer the more passionate writings of Emily and Charlotte Bronte. Enough cluttering up your review section with that though!

I adored this new update, a mischevious Snape plus a clever Hermione and a bested Lucius can only end in deliciousness! Can't wait to hear more about this married magic, sounds like a really interesting concept.
person celesumi
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahaha....seems that the hermione is picking up a thing or two from those sneaky death eaters :) i can totally picture it in my mind that snape would interfere a bit with the two of them :) can't wait to see what happens to hermione once lucius catches her! yay!
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Well done cos it is the perfect mix of cool story and hot lovely smuttiness, yum! I love Lumione and this is one of the best I've ever read. Mmm, I want some big, bad death eater please!