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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story! I am loving it!!
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Her big, bad death eater loved her, was in love with her, was in fact, her true love." AWWW!

Ok, that man is hot - and he loves to spank doesn't he? This was such a sweet chapter where he clearly shows his love but also his dominance. LOL - lucky Hermione. So impatient - sometimes slow is good.
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 19: Hermione isn
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 20: Wow! You do write some glorious smut. Lucius is scrumptious as the master in their marriage, dealing with her bad behavior with a firm punishment followed by an even more firm f**king. And then, Part Two! I had to turn on the air conditioner and it
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would still love to see Severus try to get out of a match. His sneaky mind gives all sorts of ideas for twists and turns! And the idea of him coming to Lucius for marital advice makes me grin. Lovley chapter, sweet and hot at the same time.
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If you're a sucker for happy endings (and without giving too much away!) please PLEASE read Jane Eyre by Emily Bronte! That single book alone shaped my life in confusing and wonderful ways, so much that I am planning to my do Masters on some concepts found in the book. It truly is literature at its best.

ON TO THE GOOD STUFF! Amazing new chapter, love the affectionate and happy Lucius! He is just so damn scrumptious! I'd love to have him installed in my shower...AHEM.

I like the new twist with the married magic, it's unique and adds something special to the story, a tangible expression and proof of their love. Excellent new chapter!
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

LOLOL! Aw this was great! Hermione is not going down without a fight. She is so bound and determined to tick Lucius off, isn
person celesumi
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what i wouldn't give to have lucius to tell me he loves me! i greatly enjoyed the new chapter and love how lucius can be endearing when he wants to be :) i think i do with a lucius in my life applying spakings and whatnot ;)
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.