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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

person celesumi
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh! lucius is just to damn good looking! the disheveled, just done at the office look is definitely one of my favorites, and i'm quite certain that i would die a happy gal if i saw lucius like that! i honestly don't get how he has a ginormous closet when he should just walk around naked (i mean...really). but i'm definitely looking forward to hermione's punishment for snooping :) yum!
person Quiranna
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AFF is a blessing in the disguise of really good porn...and by the way don't do AFF.com....it's a porn site lol...I found that out accidentally. But unfortunately you already negated my idea....I think it would have been fun to do a triad....whats more fun than one big bad death eater? TWO big bad death eaters....Other than that, Ginny is taken...and I have no idea...No one I can think of would be a good match. I can't wait to see what you do with this though *slobbers at the thoughts of the traid skipping through her brain* That's just hot lol.
person OUFAN
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh the TOY BOX!!! What fun. This story is just so much fun. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the latest chapter and felt the need to review this time. You did a good job describing the atmosphere of Lucius's closet. I imagine he is something of a clotheshorse! Severus is more in the story now, and it's getting tense between them (albeit in a different way than with Lucius). I wonder if the nitpicking of Severus will go further. It was smart to leave on a cliffhanger, as it probably generates more reviews! Update soon hun!
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 21: Hermione has fallen in love, but isn
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! And don't make any excuses. They aren't needed. After all anticipation is the spice in the dish and from what I can see it's going to be a very hot dish in deed! Excellent work and please update as soon as you can.
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM


Chapter 22:
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 23: You
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant as always.
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I think that Severus may end up getting matched soon after receiving that letter. If he does, I hope that he gets someone nice. I look forward to reading more to see what happens.