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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

person Quiranna
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LMAO...OMG we have prolly read some of the same stories! Lmao. Too Much is saved in my favorites lol. Hot hot hot...and is it just me, but does amanuensis sound either really dirty or like one of those really graphoc medical terms? I know the definition, but it still sounds very strange to me...I seem to be on a Law and Order SVU kick...I mean seriously WTF? I'm also fond of the few HP/HG/DM stories there are out there. I loved what a witch needs! I'm a fan of one of your readers actually La Bibliographe? She's awesome, completely awesome! Excellent installment by the way...so when is Hermione gonna get one of those little bundles of joy?
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Excellent update! I can't wait to see if she does or doesn't get pregnant. Keep up the good work and update when you can
person twinsie
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I stumbled upon this story completely by accident, and now I'm glad I did. I love marriage law stories, but Lucius and Hermione makes it even more interesting ... not to mention juice-say (that's definitely more than juicy). XD

Great job ... can't wait for the next update.
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow i am seriously loving this fic..

Chapter 4 -- THe fight scene was genius from the charm on the stairs to the way Lucius thwarted Hermione.

Chapter 19 -- I seriously want Hermione's lingerie.. oh boy oh boy!!!
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Girl - that was probably the hottest scene to date. I love how they can just still lose all inhibitions and admit their feelings. I like this side of Lucius, he's not too sappy but he loves his wife. I loved the baby naming. Sev needs some attention and this was so touching of Harry. I think he just rose a notch in Lucius' book.

Hmm, Hermione preggers - yeah Lucius you old, sexy, bad-ass dog! :-)
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 24: Those two have now wandered into kinky territory and it looks like they both love being there. Hermione is probably going to visit all the implements Lucius keeps in his closet sooner or later. She
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!! Most excellent!! As much as I loved, loved, loved the smut scene, I think the part I enjoyed the most was when Lucius starting thinking about babies!!
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter, one of the best I think, and considering how many great chapters this story has had, that is saying quite a bit:-)) I can easily see a little blond, curlyheadded girl, pestering her big brother Draco and "uncle" Severus with an inane amount of questions:-))
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Totally awsome, I can't to see what idea you might write about them extending their family, does he ask, does it just happen, does she ask, or something totally different. I can't wiat to find out.
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cruel, so cruel of you, but I loved it! LOL. Severus will have NO idea how to react that a despised Potter has been named after him, but at leat we all appreciate our potions master, don't we?